A rather long authors note for you all!

Well for those of you who are not familiar with me, you may skip this. Unless you want to hear my apologies and excuses.

Well anyways, I'M BACK! Its been two years, two long years since I last updated anything. But I have a logical explanation for that, for you see, I hadn't had anyway to come on here! No computer and no internet left me in shambles, so I moved on to another site for that time being WattPad where I had adopted a new Fandom to write about, CreepyPasta. If you are interested in that then you can go follow me PupTheKiller. Well anyways I finally found a way to come back here, and I'm using it to write a whole new style Maximum ride and it will blow any other Maximum Ride fan fics that I have done right out of the water! so you have that to look forward to.

so The new and approved Alyssa is here with better writing skills and a divine new idea. And since I have a thing for murders now (Hence CreepyPasta) This story will be gory. You have been warned!

so without further-a-due- I present you with this:

Disclaimer; I do not own any rights to the Maximum Ride name, nor do I own the characters, That rightfully belongs to Patterson.

haha gottcha there, you thought I was writing the story. annnyyywwaaayyys, here we go.

Max ran through the darkened woods, her face flushed from the bitter cold. She ran with inhuman speed, which should be expected from her. She felt her self slip on a nearby tree root and she stumbled forward face planting onto the ground. Max let out a moan in pain as she got back up, but it was too late. That thing had grabbed her by the throat lifting her up so she would face him. Max struggled in his grip, pulling his hands away, but sadly she wasn't strong enough. Max's dirty blond hair swayed around her and the only sounds that could be heard were Max's gasps and gags as she had a hard time taking in air. Max couldn't breath, he had cut off her air ways as he just stared deep into her eyes. It unnerved her to see that this Eyeless being could stare right into her eyes as if he could see her perfectly.

Max though about Iggy, But this Thing was far more advanced than Iggy. His movements were straight to the point, where as Iggy still staggered and struggled slightly. The being smiled slightly and Max could see its pointed teeth, perfectly white. Max took this time to actually take in his appearance, unnaturally white hair, eyeless eye sockets that seemed to spill out a red liquid down his cheeks and onto his black hoodie, his skin was a slight grey color. Max felt repulsed but she remained calm as she tried to suck in air.

"Hello, Maximum." He spoke with a deep voice, his voice strangely soothed Max and it creeped her out as well. The man chuckled and he threw Max down. "You've become weak, my dear. Come with me i'll train you to be strong again." Again with his voice, it almost made Max attracted to it, it made her seem like she should obey his command.

Almost.

"No, I'm afraid I cannot do that." Max said stubbornly as she stood up brushing the dry leaves off of her pants.

"I'm afraid that's the wrong answer, darling. You need to come with me, if you want to see your flock survive." He said smirking "Oh and call me Liu for the time being." He quickly added before he grabbed onto Max's arm once more. Max growled in fury as she Kicked Liu right in the gut. Liu let out a small groan but he was over it quickly and he held onto her tighter, enough that if he were to add anymore force it would completely crush her wrist.

Max sighed and she just kept quite and she followed him through the woods, no she was not surrendering, she was curious as to what would happen if she did in fact followed him. Soon they found themselves at a clearing, neither spoke a word to each other since they left their spot, but the suspense was killing Max and she was just too damn curious, it nagged the back of her mind demanding that she got answers.

"Why are we here?" Max asked in barely a whisper and she hoped the voice in her head would lend her words of encouragement, but nothing came from the voice as she'd expect. Liu stopped and he turned to Max, his eye sockets stared directly into her honey brown eyes and he chuckled.

"This is your new home Max. Don't worry, I've already informed your flock as to why you were going to be here and they have seemed very opened with the idea." Liu said as he walked over to a rock. Max stopped. So they knew that she'd be here. Max closed her eyes and focused on Angel.

Angel, Do you guys really know where I am? Max sent a mind message to Angel, she was then replied with only a simple yes and nothing more.

Max looked up at Liu and he had correctly placed in a pin at the base of the rock. Liu then pressed a button in which opened a hidden passage way in the ground. Max stared her jaw agape. Liu grinned and he took her hand and walked down the stairs with her.

"Welcome to your new home, Maximum."

So chapter one is done, what do you guys think? Let me know in the comments below.