After potc 4

Rachel - long brown wavy, blue/green eyes-loud, in charge, confident

Helena- dark brown straight, a bit longer that a bob, green eyes,- Clever, quick thinker, thoughtful

Bonnie –curly light blonde long, blue eyes, - Relaxed, friendly, not serious, but sensitive

Pippa- dirty blonde hair, straight shoulder length, brown eyes, -Caring, easy going, down to earth.


Four friends were settling down to go to sleep they had just watched a scary movie and it seemed that they weren't relaxed at all, they were all around Helena's house and Rachel had the idea of watching a scary movie at 1am

"Bonnie please get down from there" sighed Rachel "it wasn't THAT bad"

She was standing on the table in the corner

"Noooooo why did we have to watch a scary film last?" she complained, creeping down slowly from the table cautiously looking around.

Rachel didn't seemed to be bothered at all about it, she never really found anything that scary, rollercoasters, heights, ghosts, spiders, clowns… she was a strong member of their friendship group, in fact she made most of the decisions. Helena would choose something that wouldn't be the best for everyone; Bonnie always got them into bad situations with her head in the clouds and Pippa never really thought things through well enough.


"OH MY GOD! WHAT WAS THAT!" shrieked Helena

They all screamed and jumped on the sofa all but Rachel who just jumped out of her skin from her screaming.

"It's returned!" Bonnie yelled as she jumped back on the table.

Pippa, who was hiding under a pillow, peeped over.

"Is it gone?" she whispered quietly

"Look guys there was nothing there in the bloody first place!" Rachel said irritably getting annoyed with her friends being such wimps.

"I thought I saw something outside!" Helena started staring at Rachel wide eyed.

She rolled her eyes at her, she was about to comment when there was a loud echoed thump coming from the next room. Now Rachel felt slightly nervous hoping that they hadn't heard did.

"You heard that right?" Pippa asked shaking, they nodded.

"I'm sure it was just a cat" Rachel reassured quietly.

"I don't have a cat" Helena answered promptly.

"Or dog?" she asked promisingly.

"Dogs would be making more noise than just one thump-...

…-I don't have a dog" she sounded surprised herself, her green eyes bulging.

"Fish?" Bonnie asked from behind the curtain.

They turned to look at her in confusion.

"Might of fell over" she mumbled.

After a few minutes of silence and then considering whether to investigate they came to conclusion as to wait... For about ten minutes.

"Look told, you just one of those noises that happens that turns out to be nothing"

"Oh there was something alright in there!" Pippa announced

"yeah and no one wanted to check it out so now we will never know and you guys are going to continue to be freaked out as hell!" Rachel said.

"You could of checked! You're the one not scared and made us watch that film to freak us out!" Pippa argued in a quick low tone.

Before she could respond, Bonnie broke into a loud speech which could literally wake up everyone else down the whole street.

"oh holy god please let us live in peace from evil demon or ghost or whatever that thump was and let us live life long and happy and…. And yeah…..

There was silence as they looked at Bonnie who had a thoughtful expression.

"oh oh oh and before you go my holy lord in the high heavens" by now everyone thought she had finally lost it "change our lives to make it more…. Exciting!" she looked at the others with a manic smile which looked frightening. "OH YEAH! Sorry lord I forgot, amen." She bowed.

There was another long confused silence

"She must be possessed." Pippa said finally.

"No she's just being weird." Helena replied "as usual"

She hopped down from the table. "Well at least God is on our side girls!" she exclaimed.

"1 point for God and none for the demon thingy."

Oh good we safe now" muttered Rachel sarcastically.

She turned towards Bonnie and saw that she had fallen asleep on the sofa.

"oh thank god!" Pippa exclaimed looking up " she's finally gone"

"she was starting to freak me out a bit" Helena said seriously.


It was coming up to about 2 now and everyone was sleeping. but then there was a large bright light that filled the room and caused each girl to wake up suddenly and look around it fright.

they saw the light creep closer until they could barely see eachother, they got up and tried to get up towards the door. But they couldn't physically move forward.

"WHATS HAPPENING?" Rachel shouted.

"oh my god i'm dying..." Pippa murmered.

"Now this is what i call exciting, thanks oh holy one!"

that was the last thing they heard before they heard a loud noise as if everything started to move and crumble around them, they ended up falling and then there was darkness.


i hope you like it so far, it's pretty random and strange but i couldn't resist :) heheee