What if Tris never died? Here's my version to read. Tell me if you like it or not.
Tris POV
" I made it with just a scratch, Tobias" She said to Tobias. She fingered the huge scar on her back, as she thought about Tobias and her, having an happy ending with lots of kids. "Just a scratch? That's a huge scar, Tris," Said Tobias. Tris struggled to get up in Tobias's bed, finally out of the hospital, with her stitches. Tobias came to her aid and said, "I think I should get you your own apartment, you are starting to work now." Tris replied, "Okay, as long as you're with me."
Four weeks later...
Tobias POV
"Wow, I really do think Tris will love her birthday present!"He thought to himself. Tobias said enthusiastically in his head, "I'm sure she'll say yes to marry me,"After the work that Tobias and Tris did together, they headed on to the gym, where Christina set up a party for Tris. Right before we went in, Tris kissed me for what seemed like phone beeped and it was Christina, who said that they were done setting up the party. Right when we went in, Christina said, "First things first, Tris, I'm gonna give you a makeover as a present. Tris replied tiredly, "Okay, coming!" Then she looked up at him and said," Wow, what a party! I like it!"