Okay! So this is my first fan fiction! Yay! I would appreciate reviews! I would like to know if I did a good job with this chapter and what I can do to make it better!
December's Wish Chapter 1
The wind whipped my hair around my face as I took one last look around the port. I was kind of scared of leaving. I didn't know anybody outside my little hometown, but I guess it didn't matter because no one wanted to see me at home anyway. Tim had made sure of that. I shuffled onboard the cruise ship and hung my head with a sigh.
By the time I had checked into my cabin, the voyage was already underway and because I had nothing else to do, I began to wonder around the deck. I saw a swimming pool where other trainers were keeping their water Pokemon and thought that maybe Jerry, my Wailmer needed some fresh air. I reached for the pokeballs at my waist, pulled out the great ball, and threw it high in to the air. A red ball of light flew out from inside it, and turned in to a Snorlax instead of the Wailmer I was expecting. I had grabbed the wrong pokeball. Again. Labeling them still didn't help much because they were named almost the exact same thing. I immediately began to regret this decision as Larry landed in the pool with a resounding splash. I got many glares as water Pokemon of all shapes and sizes went flying. I burned with embarrassment, and called back Larry as quickly as possible. When I made it around to the other end of the boat, I released my Wailmer in to the ocean on the right side. He yawned happily, as I leapt on to his back. I was almost kind of happy that I had become an instant social pariah. I needed some time alone to think.
Urrrghh... Tim that jerk... I'd like to see Jerry hit him with a hydro pump... or Larry could sit on him! But still I...
An obnoxious voice interrupted my thoughts. "I saw what you did to those water Pokemon. That was just cold." I looked up to see a boy about my age (about 16 or 17) with dark hair and ice blue eyes that practically glowed. I decided to respond in an equally annoying voice.
"I may not know you, but if you make a Dewgong joke, I promise I'll slap you."
"Hey. Calm down," he chuckled, "I'm Ryan, by the way. Nice to meet you, Water Girl."
"It's Dessa. Well, it's really December, but Dessa is what my friends... used to call me." I sighed. "but since you are definitely not a friend of mine I highly suggest that you call me Dec-"
"Okay! So it's Dessa, then." He said with wink. "See ya later."
He winked at me! What nerve! He left me and my thoughts stewing on my Wailmer.
Urrrghh... Ryan that jerk...