Hey guys!! I'm writing my first real story. I hope it's ok. Please leave a review if it is. You don't have to write a paragraph review just write OK. I'll continue if anybody likes it.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own any of the Stephenie Meyer's characters. I don't own the Jonas Brothers or Robert Pattinson. I do own Ria, Kayla, Riley, and other characters I mention that are not related to Stephenie Meyer's characters. I hate writing disclaimer's so this is the only one for the whole story. I DON'T OWN!!! there now I can happily start my story.
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"RIA, STOP OBSESSING OVER THE JONAS BROTHER'S AND GET YOUR BUTT DOWN HERE!" I screamed up the ceiling.
"COMING!" she replied.
Well now that that's taken care of I should introduce myself. Hi, I'm Isabella Marie Swan. I'm 18 years old. I have brown hair that goes down to the small of my back. I'm about 5'4, which I know is short but that's me. I have brown eyes that my friends say are like pools of melted chocolate. SURE they are. I have a petite build. I'm not a size D in the boob department but I'm ok. We can't all be Kayla size. I love dressing up randomly just like Audelina. I wear preppy, gothic, or just random. I'm the quiet slash weird one in the group.
Speaking of my friends, we all live together in a huge mansion in Seattle. After we graduated, our parents decided that we earned a MANSION. We live near a forest, which we all love going in I for one don't like money being spent on me. But, I'm grateful that they did buy it. Having said that I should probably mention that my friends and I are in a band.
We're called The Sharpies Hide. Weird name, I know, we've heard. The reason for that odd name was that when we first started the band, we made t-shirts to wear at our first show.
We were using Sharpies because they have this cool inky color. So we were happily coloring on shirts when Ria dropped hers and it fell under the couch (we were working in the living room).
When she tried to get it, she couldn't. So she started grumbling, "Where is it?" Audelina being the smarticle person she is replied "They're hiding shhhh." We all stared at her for a few seconds, then burst out laughing.
Kayla then added in as a joke, "The Sharpies Hide, what a cool band name." We stopped laughing and stared at Kayla for a minute or so, before all of us started screaming because that was an awesome name. So that's the story of our weird name.
I keep mentioning names so I should introduce some of my homies aka my best friends in the whole world.
First off, let's talk about Ria. Ria is, what I like to call, a TALL person. She's about 5'6. She has pretty long brown hair. It goes past her elbows. She has ACTUAL chocolate pool eyes. She has a, like I said, TALL person build. She likes to dress bright and cheerful. She is of Hindu heritage. She is the one that makes the most friends in our little group. I love her all the same.
There's something very important you need to know about her, she is in love with 5 guys. She's obsessed with The Jonas Brother's and Robert Pattinson. Her room is covered in posters of them. The last guy is none other than one of my guy friend's RILEY!! Riley is about the same height as Ria, has a weird curly, afro type set of hair. He has brown eyes that are a bit dark and usually filled with mischief. Riley always finds ways to drive me insane but he's my guy friend all the same.
So that's Ria and next is Kayla.
Kayla, Kayla, Kayla. Kayla has black hair that she can cut herself professionally. She has brown eyes that are always filled with happiness. The only time she's not happy is when something bad happens. In which we all comfort her. She is about 5'4, like ME. She has a model like build. She has a full time membership in the boob department. She can get any guy she wants. She's a bit on the flirty side. But that doesn't mean she's a slut. She wears mainly black clothes. But she's not emo or gothic. She calls herself punk. She is an awesome Asian. She is the crazy one of the group so we have a lot of fun.
Last but not least, theirs Miss Audelina. Audz (as Kayla likes to call her) has brown hair that's almost black. She put blonde highlights in her hair a few years ago, but now they just blend in and fade a little in color. She has a full set of bangs and armpit length hair. Her eyes are brown, but they look black without sunlight. In the sunlight her eyes turn light brown and slightly orangey in color. She's about my height and like me has a petite build. She has the same deal as me in the boob department. She is Salvadorian. Which is from El Salvador. Haha I'm smart. Ok back to her. She is the quiet and loud at the same time person of the group. I love her.
Now that all of my babes have been introduced, I'll just wait for Ria to come down the stairs.
Kayla is on MySpace talking to someone from Hawaii. Her cousins live there and introduce her to people all the time.
Audelina is reading a book and listening to her iPod. She loves reading.
I am of course drawing and thinking of song lyrics.
Ria finally comes down the stairs.
And of course she is wearing an "I LOVE THE JONAS BROTHERS" t-shirt and jeans covered with Robert Pattinson's face. But I love her all the same.
"Ok guys let have a little discussion so please stop whatever you're doing", I called out.
Everyone stopped and turned around to face me.
"Ok so we have something we need to decide", I started, "Today while I was on the computer I was looking at my emails, and I stumbled upon this email of a bulletin. The bulletin said that there is going to be a band competition in downtown Seattle. The only rule we have to follow is that, the songs have to be original."
They all stared at me a few seconds before the screaming began.
"Hell yes!!"
"Yah!!"
"Let's Do it Fishes!!"
"I'm guessing that's a yes?" I asked unnecessarily.
"Well, all we have to do is figure out some new songs by next Friday and do some practicing and we're set!!!" I added.
"Umm Bells, don't you already have some songs written down in that book of yours?" Audz asked.
"Well yah but I'm not sure if they're any good" I replied.
"That's what you said about our last songs and look where we are today" Ria pointed out.
"Fine" I surrendered.
"YAY!!" they squealed when I gave them my notebook.
"BUT", I warned, "I only finished one song and we still need 2 more."
"This songs kinda sad but we'll turn it into a bit of rocker beat so it'll be fine" Kayla observed.
"Yah, but I'll work on an upbeat song for the number 2 song." I added in.
"What will we do for the 3rd song?" Audz asked.
"Umm, I have a suggestion" Ria said.
"NO!!!" we all screamed.
Ria always has the same suggestion, a Jonas Brother's type song. We are NOT doing that.
"Wait, it's not a Jonas Brother's type song" she replied.
"Okay, shoot" I said.
"Well why don't we try a hip-hop thing" she requested.
"N---" before I said no I actually thought about it. I turned to everybody else and said "That doesn't sound half bad. We haven't done a hip-hop song yet. What do you guys think?"
Kayla replied with a "Why not?"
Audz replied with a "Ehhh sure."
"So it's decide we'll do my one song, then an upbeat one, then a hip-hop." I said verifying it.
"Yepp" they replied.
"Do you guys want to practice the song we already have?" I asked.
"Sure"
"Hell yeah"
"Ehhh, ok" was what I got as a reply.
We headed to the music room. (Yes we have a music room. We all decided that we didn't want to use the garage)
"Ok let's do sound check" I requested.
Ria starts testing her drums with an awesome beat.
Kayla starts playing a tune on her keyboard.
Audz starts tuning her electric guitar.
I test the microphones. We all have one next to our mouth so if they want to join in
I usually doing the singing because everyone says I have an awesome voice but I don't believe them. My voice is good enough is what I say. But anyways I usually sing.
I also test my electric guitar. Audz and I rock.
"Okay everything sounds good, let's figure out a beat", I said.
"How about Ria does a soft kind of beat, Kayla plays a higher beat,
and me and you do a high beat." Audz chips in.
(A.N./ as you can see I don't know that much about notes so I'm just going to say beats)
"Sounds good", the rest of us reply.
Ria starts out the soft beat, Kayla joins in with her beat a few seconds later.
Audz and I join in after a few seconds.
We let the chorus ring the air before I start singing
The tears stream down her cheeksShe doesn't wipe them away
She let's them fall making tracks for all the
World to see
(To see…)
(Yah yah)
Her eyes hold a pain like no other yet,
There is a smile on her face
She stands on the edge
Looking at the world below
Happiness she once had
Smile genuine and true
It was all a lie
A lie that turned into reality
She jumps off the ledge perfectly contentHer hair spins wildly out of control
It surrounds her tear-stained face
She hears the screams
But her mind is on happier times
One scream breaks through her mind
And it's hers (It's hers..)
But she's not scared
She's not sad
She's finally happy
She's falling downnn
And I don't think she's getting up again
(Not again... Not again…)
Tell me if you care
Tell me would you cry?
I want to know
(I want to know)
But it's too late now
(It's too late...
Yah… yah)
Because I'm falling downnn
And I'm not getting up again
(Not again… Not again)
We whisper the last lines.
Tears stream down her cheeks
She lets them fall
She wants the world to see
The tracks against her skin
Her eyes hold endless amounts of pain
She has a smile on her face
She jumps and she falls
(She falls)
She closes her eyes
She let's the darkness consume her
She falls
She falls
And she's not getting up again
(Not again)
We ended the last few notes.
There was silence and then…
"We rock!!"
"Hell yes!!"
"We are jonas-tic"
We all turn and stare at Ria.
"What?"
"Jonas-tic?"
"Yup. Jonas and fantastic combined."
We continue to stare at her.
"GET OVER IT!!!!"
We look away.
"Ok so now that we practiced that song, and we agree it's pretty good, we just have to work on the other songs."
"LUNCH TIME!!!" we all scream after minutes of silence.
And off we went.
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Ok, so what did you guys think? It's my first time with long stories. And this is just the first chapter. RIA guess what!!! I OWN YOU!!! Mwahahaha ok evil laugh is finished.
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