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When you've spent three months learning from a man who's been called a genius, wouldn't you think you gain some of his knowledge? I always wondered why I haven't. Why I haven't gained the intelligence to change the way my ending happened. Maybe then I could have changed the way this ended and instead of seeing the faces of the man I've been inspired by as I fall to a cold watery grave. Who knows, maybe I should've paid more attention to the words he told me moments before. Or maybe even if I learned something, yet the way things happened can't be changed and I was meant to die. Who knows...At least I did what I thought was right and saved them all from certain death. I watched my sister rush to my side screaming my name and reaching for my hand. Only missing by a few inches right before the others tried. I smiled and took our common enemy and closed my eyes as I waited to the hard impact with the water.

"No enemy is impossible to bring down, if you know their weakness."