The Friend: Rewritten

by Vermin616

Corneria has been forsaken by Star Fox for 10 years, but they are returning for their very first live Star Fox QnA panel, unaware of how much their absence has impacted the population. Chase, a 19 year old male jackal, has just spent his weekly savings on a ticket to this QnA panel, which makes his low-class family upset at him. Was the money worth it?

1. Introduction

Do you remember my very first Star Fox fanfiction "The Friend"? I wouldn't blame you if you don't and honestly, it's better that it remains that way.

The Friend was ten chapters of a story that would take random nosedives into ridiculously dark and over-the-top situations whilst at the same time trying to be one about Hurt/Comfort, along with poor characters, poor world-building, poor writing and very poor dialogue. I was young when I wrote that and not a very good writer.

After reading my story again just recently, I've decided I will take the general concept of it and turn it into something better. This is a remake of "The Friend" that's meant to take the original story and make it better in every single way possible. I encourage you to not read the original story, unless you want some good laughing and cringe material. Shift your focus on this remake.

The story will focus on a young male jackal named Chase. Chase is a 19 year old college drop-out living in a poor family consisting of his mother, sister and sick grandfather. Relationships between his family are currently tense, while Chase is doing his best to keep the family stable and also provising medication for his old man.

Chase is a big fan of the Star Fox team, a team of heroic mercenaries who are legendary in Corneria for their good deeds in the past. However, their 10 year-absence has caused the Cornerian population of Corneria City to suffer a drop in morality, aided with the rising rate of crime and corruption within politicians all around its globe. With its infrastructure slowly crumbling with its economy, Corneria City stands on its last legs, without any hope in itself to rise again.

Star Fox is about to return to Corneria, unaware of how much their absence has affected the population, for their very first Star Fox QnA panel. Chase, excited and anxious, has just spent his weekly savings on a ticket to this QnA, which builds up tension along his family and himself. Will his expense be worth it?

EDIT: The original The Friend story was deleted by yours truly. After reading it again, I simply could not allow such thing to still be up on FanFiction. Yes, it was that bad.