Maya: Hi everyone. Here's my new fanfic because I'm not going to post anymore 'Daries of Love' chapters, (if no one knew about that already). Anyway, you will all know why, if you read the 2nd Chapter of it. So...

Yami: Just tell them about the story your writing now...

Maya: Calm down Yami... essh..

Yami: Fine... sallow look

Maya: sweatdrop Okay, back to what I'm going to say. This fic is almost has better gammar and spelling. (;; Sorry don't have spell or gammar-check on my computer, so plzzz don't get mad). Also this story is about a young 16 year-old girl who falls madly in love with Pharaoh, but not right away. She waits til the right moment to tell him, but will she? Let's read and find out. (Plus I made the Place of Egypt up so don't try not to get mad about that ethier).

Yami: O.O Hello, me with another girl that fall in love with me!

Maya: This is just a story calm your dog tail down. Now to the story!

Chapter 1: Pain and Suffering.

This day is a beautiful, sunshine day in Garnora Valley until the soldiers brust through the gates with a prisoner with long sandy burnet hair hanging down to her slightly torned waist. Her grass green eyes wondered around the people, then glaring back at her in chains. She could have swore she was going to be let free and out of the cluches of the bloody chains of hell. "Don't worry" one of the soldier turned back to her"Pharaoh Atumn has a reserved a place for you in the Prison." She did not say one word just stared back with an evil face. "I'm not staying here for long" she thought with courage inside"A king never lets a woman worrier in a prison."

They kept walking towards the palace when she finally pulled the chains away from the soldier and started to twirll it around above her head. She started to whip all the soldiers in the back. It cut through the armor and hint the skin to the bone. The soldiers tried to stop the blood ranging chain, but she just hint them in the face when they were near. "STOP" a voice rang out of nowhere"Stop this right now!" She stopped the chain and looked over at the shadowy figure in the cloud of dust. It none other than Seto, the high preist. He glared at her and the chain with blood on it. He looked down on the soldiers with blood on there faces and backs.

He didn't do nothing, but grabbed the chain and asked for the girl to come with him. "I don't follow anyone orders" she looked at him and telling him to let her go"We lone wolves don't listen to anyone even to a man wearing a DRESS!" He glared back at her and she tried to pull back the chain, but Seto did not let go. "This time you do" he told her as a command. He pulled her right in his face"you are a prisoner. Not an indepentant RAT who goes around and telling everyone what to do. Get with the program sweetie."

The chains slipped out of his hand when she pulled again, hard. She twirlled it again tried to whip Seto, but he pulled out his Millennium Rod and used its magic to make the chain block away from him. He also made the chain freeze in mid-air. Seto grabbed the chains once more and pulled his hardest, knocking down the girl. "Let's get going" he said his last to her and leading her to the prisons.

Maya: I hope you liked it, but I not sure about weather to keep Seto's name or put down his Egyptain one thinking look. Oh well. I'll just let you people decide. Okay? Reviews Please!