In His Shadow

by Kirameku-Rose

A poem that places a girl in a position where she does not know whether to love Vash or to give him up. She needs help. Plz review tell me how it is. There are more parts to this poem .

1. Default Chapter

IN HIS SHADOW

HE LOOKED AT ME WITH GLOWING EYES WANTING SOMETHING MORE TO HOLD.

WE COULDN'T KEEP THIS CHARADE ANY LONGER FOR A MAN WANTED FROM THE LAW COULDN'T BE WORTH WANTING.

HE SAID HE'D LOVE ME TILL DEATH DO US PART.

I WANTED NOTHING MORE TO BE WITH HIM SIDE BY SIDE LIPS TO LIPS...NOTHING MORE...

HE TOLD ME HE WILL ALWAYS LOVE HER "REM"...

I RESPECTED HIM FOR THAT WAS HIS FIRST LOVE....

BUT IN HIS SHADOW I ALWAYS STAYED...NEVER KNOWING WHAT HE WAS UP AGAINST...

WANTING HIM INSIDE ME CARESSING MY BODY... HOLDING ME TIGHTLY TO HIS DANGERLY SCARRED BODY.

WANTING TO HOLD HIS HEAD CLOSE TO MY CHEST WHILE MAKING LOVE THAT WAS SO PASSIONATELY FELT.

AS I WAITED FOR HIM TO COME...LONG MONTHS WAITED FOR HIS RETURN....

COME BACK TO ME SOON...TO MY HOME IN THIS

GUNSMOKE PLANET...

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