Vendui' il'er! This is my first LotR fic so please be
kind.
*..* = Elvish that I don't know ~..~ = Feiona's thoughts
'...' = other character's thoughts Italics = Lady Galadrial
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Chapter 1: Leaving everything you know
"And for homework today, yes class homework, you are to do problems 1-25 on pg. 162 in the book." Angelic Avalon, also known as Mrs. Avalon to her class, stated laughing as her class groaned in unison, well almost her whole class. Far in the corner of the room sat a young woman with her nose stuck in 'The Lord if the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring.' The young woman was none other than Feiona Avalon, little sister to the teacher herself. Angelic gazed over to her sighing sadly, hating to see her baby sister so alone. Feiona was different, that's all there was to it. In personality and looks. Midnight blue hair with silver streaks and matching eyes that are natural just isn't normal, though is makes her one of the most beautiful girls in the school. Also her silent nature ( which isn't voluntary) attracts the male population like bee's to honey, thus causing the females to hate her,
As if sensing her sister's gaze, Feiona looked up from her book and smiled brightly. As Angelic was about to return the smile she heard the distinct buzzing of the bell signaling the end of the day. Bracing herself for the tidal wave of student that was to rush out of her class room, Angelic saw Feiona calmly pack up her supplies and walk up to the front of the room. Standing next to her big sister, Feiona waited until the last student left before motioning to the door indicating that she was going to leave. Angelic smiled and told Feiona to find Alex and meet her at the car. Feiona nodded and left to find her twin brother.
Feiona sighed as she walked down the hall to her brother's Health classroom. It was hard having your older sister as your math teacher. Having them looking over your shoulder at home making sure your doing your homework, making sure you study for tests, or accidentally calling them by their first name instead of their last. She smiled sadly at the last one. ~ Calling them by their first name. I wish.~ She thought sadly. She was so engrossed in her thoughts that she didn't notice a young woman with blond hair walk in front of her until it was to late and she collided with her. "Watch where your going, handicap." The girl shouted. "Are you blind as well as mute?" Tears of frustration filled Feiona's eyes. ~Why me? Why today?~ The blond women noticed the tears and started laughing. "Oh look guys, she's going cry." She said to her friends. 'Oh shut up, Cameron." A male voice said from behind Feiona, who turned around to see her brother standing there. Alexander, or Alex for short, looked like a masculine version of Feiona. He, too, had Midnight blue hair and eyes, but only his tips were silver.
Cameron gulped at the site of Alex's cold blue eyes. Even if she didn't want to admit it, Alex was the hottest guy in school and she didn't want to be on his bad side. Feiona placed her hand on Alex's arm and motioned to the door. He nodded, sending one last glare at Cameron, and walked with Feiona to the car.
The ride home was pretty uneventful. Every once in a while Feiona would wave to someone on the street. "So.. Angie how was your day?" Alex asked in the passenger seat. Turning to her little brother, Angie smiled." Oh, it was fine. Jason made a fool of himself in C Block. Nothing big." He nodded, glancing back in the backseat to see Feiona reading her book again. Rolling his eyes he reached back and snatched the book from her hands. "And how was your day, sister dear?" Feiona glared at him, the silver specks in her eyes flashing. Holding out her hand she motioned for Alex to give her book back. ~ I was getting to a good part. ~ Alex grinned shacking his head. Opening the book to the first page he read the Poem of the Ring out loud.
" Three Rings for the Elven-Kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf -Lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for the Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne,
In the land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them.
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them.
In the land of Mordor where the Shadows lie."
Suddenly there was a bright flash of light and when their vision cleared, Feiona was nowhere to be seen.
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That's is for the first chappy. So what do you think? Do you see that purplish-gray button in the corner? You do. Ok now click on it and tell me what you think, please.
*..* = Elvish that I don't know ~..~ = Feiona's thoughts
'...' = other character's thoughts Italics = Lady Galadrial
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Chapter 1: Leaving everything you know
"And for homework today, yes class homework, you are to do problems 1-25 on pg. 162 in the book." Angelic Avalon, also known as Mrs. Avalon to her class, stated laughing as her class groaned in unison, well almost her whole class. Far in the corner of the room sat a young woman with her nose stuck in 'The Lord if the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring.' The young woman was none other than Feiona Avalon, little sister to the teacher herself. Angelic gazed over to her sighing sadly, hating to see her baby sister so alone. Feiona was different, that's all there was to it. In personality and looks. Midnight blue hair with silver streaks and matching eyes that are natural just isn't normal, though is makes her one of the most beautiful girls in the school. Also her silent nature ( which isn't voluntary) attracts the male population like bee's to honey, thus causing the females to hate her,
As if sensing her sister's gaze, Feiona looked up from her book and smiled brightly. As Angelic was about to return the smile she heard the distinct buzzing of the bell signaling the end of the day. Bracing herself for the tidal wave of student that was to rush out of her class room, Angelic saw Feiona calmly pack up her supplies and walk up to the front of the room. Standing next to her big sister, Feiona waited until the last student left before motioning to the door indicating that she was going to leave. Angelic smiled and told Feiona to find Alex and meet her at the car. Feiona nodded and left to find her twin brother.
Feiona sighed as she walked down the hall to her brother's Health classroom. It was hard having your older sister as your math teacher. Having them looking over your shoulder at home making sure your doing your homework, making sure you study for tests, or accidentally calling them by their first name instead of their last. She smiled sadly at the last one. ~ Calling them by their first name. I wish.~ She thought sadly. She was so engrossed in her thoughts that she didn't notice a young woman with blond hair walk in front of her until it was to late and she collided with her. "Watch where your going, handicap." The girl shouted. "Are you blind as well as mute?" Tears of frustration filled Feiona's eyes. ~Why me? Why today?~ The blond women noticed the tears and started laughing. "Oh look guys, she's going cry." She said to her friends. 'Oh shut up, Cameron." A male voice said from behind Feiona, who turned around to see her brother standing there. Alexander, or Alex for short, looked like a masculine version of Feiona. He, too, had Midnight blue hair and eyes, but only his tips were silver.
Cameron gulped at the site of Alex's cold blue eyes. Even if she didn't want to admit it, Alex was the hottest guy in school and she didn't want to be on his bad side. Feiona placed her hand on Alex's arm and motioned to the door. He nodded, sending one last glare at Cameron, and walked with Feiona to the car.
The ride home was pretty uneventful. Every once in a while Feiona would wave to someone on the street. "So.. Angie how was your day?" Alex asked in the passenger seat. Turning to her little brother, Angie smiled." Oh, it was fine. Jason made a fool of himself in C Block. Nothing big." He nodded, glancing back in the backseat to see Feiona reading her book again. Rolling his eyes he reached back and snatched the book from her hands. "And how was your day, sister dear?" Feiona glared at him, the silver specks in her eyes flashing. Holding out her hand she motioned for Alex to give her book back. ~ I was getting to a good part. ~ Alex grinned shacking his head. Opening the book to the first page he read the Poem of the Ring out loud.
" Three Rings for the Elven-Kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf -Lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for the Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne,
In the land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them.
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them.
In the land of Mordor where the Shadows lie."
Suddenly there was a bright flash of light and when their vision cleared, Feiona was nowhere to be seen.
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That's is for the first chappy. So what do you think? Do you see that purplish-gray button in the corner? You do. Ok now click on it and tell me what you think, please.