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FLASHBACK

"Bye daddy", said Lily Evans as she gave her father a hug before heading for the train.

"Take care sweetie", said Tyler Evans letting go of her daughter. "I'll see you for Christmas Break"

"Ok. Just promise me your going to pick me up kay?" said Lily

"I promise"

"Bye daddy"

"Good bye sweetie"

END OF FLASHBACK Lillian Christine Evans walked out of the train and was looking around to see if she could see her father. He usually doesn't come to pick her up because he just sends a chauffeur to come and get her but this time Lily wanted her dad to come. She saw him and ran towards and to give him a hug.

"Daddy!" said Lily "You did come"

"Of course I did sweetie", he said, "How was school?"

"Okay, I guess, it could be better though," Lily said as she let go of her dad. She look at her dad and saw it was only him.

Tyler Evans was a tall handsome 5'11 ft man. He had dark black hair and bright piercing bright eyes that Lily had inherited. It was still a surprise that he hadn't yet remarried.

"Where's Petunia?" asked Lily

"I'm sorry but you how-"

"Yea I know how she is, I shouldn't have even asked"

Lily's father sighed. "Come on" he said helping her with her trunk.
Petunia and Lily used to be inseparable. They were always together and close ever since their mother had died. They would tell each other everything, they even shared rooms until Lily received her Hogwarts letter. FLASHBACK

"Hey! Petunia", said excited 11-year-old Lily. "Look look I got this letter see? Its says I'm a witch" and show the letter to her sister. Petunia snatched the letter and read it and turn to Lily and gave her a look repulsive and disgusted look on her face.

Lily remembered the first horrifying words that came out.

"I always thought you were FREAK. YOU WERE PROBABLY THE REASON WHY MOM'S GONE. I HATE YOU

"P-P-Petuina you don't mean-"

"Of course I do, I HATE YOU." "Petunia no you don't-"

"NO I HATE YOU", said Petunia and slammed Lily's bedroom door.

From that day on Petunia had moved out of Lily's room, but most importantly they lost there friendship.

END OF FLASHBACK

Lily shook the thought out of her head and went into her car.

"Awww home sweet home, finally, said Lily as she and her dad went to her house if you could call it a house it was more like a mansion than a house. She looked around and saw everything was still the same.

"Lily", said a soft voice from behind.

Lily turned around and saw Alicia, her nana since she was five.

"Nana", said Lily and gave her a hug

"Oh Lily sweetie, its so nice to see you", said Alicia as she let go of Lily

Alicia had/has been Lily and Petunia Nana ever since her mother passed away. She had light brown hair with bits of gray in it and warm brown eyes that always lit up.

"Lily" said Tyler. "I'm sorry but I have to go back to the office."

But dad you said you were going to take me out remember?", said Lily turning around looking at him.

"Yes but I just got a call saying I have to go"

"Ok I guess if you must", said Lily sadly

Lily's father give her a kiss on her forehead "I love you"

"I love you too daddy, said Lily looking gloomy.

"Bye" he said and left.

Lily groan. "Nana why does he always have to do that to me why?"

"Lily dear well you know your father, he's the owner there and they need him often "

"I know but still…", said Lily sighing going up stairs to her room leaving Alicia alone.

'Great!' thought Lily opening the door to her room. 'Now what am I going to do?'

Lily threw herself on her bed, she looked at the picture frames that were standing up on her nightstand. She got the frame that had of her and her mother, Cecilia in it. Her mother was a gorgeous women with shiny, auburn hair and pretty blue eyes. In the picture, her mother was holding five-year-old Lily and was hugging and smiling Lily. Lily was holding her mothers fingers and smiling along with her mother.

Lily sighed and put the frame back. She really did miss her mom. If only…

Lily turned away but then looked back. There was another picture frame that caught her eye. It was a picture of her and her friends. They were in a wizarding debutante meeting (which Lily hated going by the way) One girl was sitting next to Lily and the other two girl were standing up behind Lily and the girl sitting next to Lily.

The girl next to Lily was Corbin Nicole Harris, one of Lily's best friends. She's was a very pretty girl with dark, curly chocolate brown hair that was just passed her shoulders and big, bright, gorgeous green eyes that made her stand out. She was a curvy 5'5' and has a crazy personality. Lily loved this girl, she had no lack of high self-esteem She's usually a friendly person but if you did annoy her or bug her she will be bit mean. She isn't afraid to speak her mind out or tell you what she really thinks of you.

The girl standing behind Lily was Valerie Isabelle Faore, another of Lily's best friends. Valerie or Val had dazzling, strawberry blonde hair that reached her mid- back and had curls at the end points. She had beautiful, dark, blue eyes that could remind anyone of the ocean sea. She reached 5'5' like Corbin, and almost have the same personality. The difference is that Val is hella lot conceited and snobbier than Corbin is and Val knew that, while Corbin TRIES with a capital T to be friendly. Val is VERY honest and like Corbin isn't afraid to speak her mind either. Lily had always wondered how the hell she and Val became such good friends.

The last girl that was standing behind Corbin is Hazel Leveska. Hazel name was pretty obvious when you saw her. She had stunning, honey, hazel eyes with black curly hair that reached at her shoulders. She was a 5'2 and the shortest of the four of them. Now Hazel, had a complete different personality than Corbin, Val, or Lily. Hazel was usually a very calm and peaceful person. She always tired to look at the positive sides of a bad situation. This was probably why Lily loved her so much.

'It's a shame they go to Beauxbatons', thought Lily getting up from her bed and heading towards her desk. 'But I can still write to them can't I?'

Lily got out a piece of parchment and started writing…

Hey Corbin!

How are you? How's school? I just got back and was wondering if you, Val and Hazel were doing anything so we could see if we could hang out.
I'm really looking forward to seeing you all again. Write back ASAP

Love Lily.

Lily got the parchment and rolled it up . She turned around and walked up near her window where her owl, Coco, was sitting inside her cage.

"Hey Coco", said Lily as she opened the cage door. "I need you to give this to Corbin okay?

Her owl gave a small 'hoot' and waited for Lily to open her window. A few minutes later she flew off.

Lily lay back down on her bed. All she could do now is wait for her friend to respond back.

A/N So here it goes. I've rewritten it b/c I really didn't like the beginning so here it goes. I hope you like it Review please