This is my first book so don't be too harsh. It is about how The Legend of Korra would be different if she had a twin sister. Hi! This is my first book so don't be too harsh. R&R so I know how to make this story better! This is my thought on how the legend of Korra could be like. I also don't know the names of Korra's parents so they are so they are going to be named Silias (father) and Kai (mother). BTW Korra's sister's name is Kami.
(White Lotus point of view)
We had traveled to every waterbender's home to seek the avatar, but we still couldn't find him/her. We were very tired and almost lost all hope that one was reborn so soon, and that we would have to search later in the year. We finally came to a house where the parents were so confidant that their child was the avatar and that our search was over.
We went into the house and explained that our journey was long and unsuccessful so we hoped they really did have the avatar, and they were so sure that they said they would be surprised if they were wrong.
Suddenly, the house began to shake, the parents didn't look too surprised while me and my colleagues were trying not to fall over or get hit by falling objects. Then the shaking stopped and two young girls, probably around five, came out of the ice/ground. One looked very fierce and determined while the other was similar but look more self-controlled.
"I'm the avatar and there is nothing you can do about it!" yelled one at the top of her lungs.
She started to bend the elements and her sister joined along. When the one that shouted was done with her performance the other was still going and started to metal bend and bend lightning from her fingertips! That was when their parents finally looked scared and ran over and took the girl's fingers before she could shoot the lightning, nearly burning the father's eyebrows off. We were so surprised! Two avatars! It was never heard of! We decided to take them both but kept them apart to find out what was going on and to see if it was possible to have two avatars at once. The fiercer one, Korra, would be taken to the South Pole while the more controlled one, Kami, was taken to Republic city. We hoped that in time they could se each other again and help restore balance to the world together. Until that time came they would train apart and forget about each other and master all the elements and be able to be linked to the spiritual world.
Well what do you think? I think it could be better and I promise it will be longer next time I update. Should I add more characters or keep somewhat the same plot? R&R and depending on the amount of reviews I will update earlier or later.
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