Ok, first of all, this is my first fanfic so please if you review, be gentle. Second, Ya, I know I'm a horrible write, I'm sorry if I don't explain what a new character looks like right away, if you absolutely MUST know what they look like, check the author notes at the end of el capitulo, for those that don't speak Spanish, that's the chapter. It takes place after KH2 ends but before the message in a bottle is found by Sora and Co. Anywho, enjoy. And R&R if you want to.
Slowly Riku turned around, unaware of the danger he was about to face. There was nothing behind him, but then, what had made the noise? Sora had told him that somewhere in these woods there was a prospective member of Organization XIII that had escaped before its destruction. Her name was Xyph and supposedly she could move things with her thoughts. Riku stopped moving; there it was again, the sound of laughter mingled with crying. What was going on in these woods? Just then a hand reached out from the ground and pulled Riku into the earth. The forest was silent once again.
"Kairi!" Sora yelled as he ran towards the girl on the beach. "What's wrong Sora?" She asked, obviously concerned. "Kairi," Sora repeated, "Riku hasn't come back yet. It's been over six hours." Kairi stopped playing with the sand and looked up at Sora, concern apparent on her features. "Sora, what are you talking about? Who is Riku?" Sora looked at the sky for a moment and seemed to be battling with his thoughts. Finally he looked back at Kairi and blinked a few times, then said, "I'm not sure, what was I talking about?" Kairi's face went blank and she said, "Want to go to my house for cake?" "Sure!" Sora replied. Together they walked off towards her house. A little girl appeared on the beach, obviously lost, and let out a little giggle. Then she began to sob. Her sister had to be stopped, but teleporting between worlds always left her weak and slightly confused. She took a step and faded into the darkness. A soft wind blew through the clearing on the beach.
Leon sat at the table in Merlin's house with the others from
Radiant Garden, discussing what to do about the new threat. "I say
we use my ship and hunt down each of the remaining ones and kill 'em
all once and for all." Cid said. "Well Cid, that might work if we
were dealing with ordinary enemies, but these four are extremely
dangerous." That was Merlin. "Oh come on Merlin!" Yuffie said,
"We can take 'em! If they weren't good enough for Organization
XIII then how are they going to be able to beat us?" Leon, who had
been silent during the entire argument, spoke, "Yuffie, they can do
things you've only imagined. They might have only been moments away
from receiving their black cloaks before Sora and the others took out
The Organization." "I agree." Said Aerith. "Just because they
weren't in it, doesn't mean they weren't dangerous enough to
be."
Suddenly a man rose from the floor, seemingly as if he was
a part of it and had just detached himself from it. Instantly there
were many sharp weapons ready to strike him. And yet he seemed
abnormally relaxed. "Why isn't this a nice welcome? My name is
Rein, nice to meet you all." His eyes met with Aerith's, and then
the house exploded.
Ok! So, what do you think of my first chapter? Yes, I know, I need to work on this and that, but telling me specifically will help me improve it in the future. So this was really just supposed to be a couple of chapters but now I've got this big LONG story in my head that probably won't be done for a few months. Anywho, onto the New Character Descriptions:
Rein: This character I based off of Raijin from FF8. His name is pronounced Rain and he is a pretty large guy. If you pissed him off he might like, I dunno, crush your skull. So his power (that we've seen so far OoOoOoOoO) is that he can "become one" with his surroundings. Making him virtually impossible to hit seeing as he can just morph into the ground or a tree or a wall, whatever. Ya, so he has black hair and brown eyes. He's tan and he is cocky.
Little Girl: I might be considerate enough to give her a name later on but I dunno. She wears a little dress with flower designs on it and some little white sandals. She is about seven years old and has jet black hair with big brown eyes. She is kind of pasty but not like "ew that girl is gross" sort of way. So far we have seen she can teleport, but what else can this small person do? Maybe nothing, I don't know. It's not like I created her or anything.