A.N: This is my first fanfiction, so please be easy on me! If you don't know, this fanfic is based on the online MMO, Fiesta Online(or just Fiesta for short). Although a lot of the dialogue is made up(and some of the places too), it's based on my real character in Fiesta. Like I said before, this is my first fanfiction, so it's probably not going to be good. Bear with me please .

Please comment and give me tips on how to do better!

*I do not own Fiesta*

A floating wooden horse and its rider sped through the decorated streets of Elderine, turning every which way and nearly colliding with other adventures. One could hear the rider's rants of frustration as she sped on by.

"Stupid. Stupid, stupid, STUPID!"

The green-and-brown clad elf jumped off of her wooden horse and brushed away her short blue hair as she approached the teleport gate back to her hometown of Roumen. Her body ached from dying over and over again, and she couldn't wait to get back home. As she came nearer to the teleport gate, an exaggeratingly happy voice boomed out from its blue, swirling depths.

"Where do you wish to go?"

The elf replied, "Roumen."

"Okey-dokey! Teleporting to Roumen."

The elf suddenly felt her body being sucked into the portal. She was…floating. No, flying. She could never quite place the happy, worriless feeling she would get when teleporting through portals. She was always at ease when gliding through the green and blue abyss. Of course, all good things have endings.

"You are now arriving in Roumen!"

The elf felt her body weight coming back, gravity pulling her down to reality. The green and blue swirls gave way to the smell of fresh flowers and baked bread. She jumped out of the portal, her wooden horse following her every step.

"Take care, young adventurer!" the portal piped cheerfully.

As the young elf explored her familiar surroundings, the feeling of frustration, anger, and a bit of dread bubbled up inside of her. She remembered how everything went wrong, how everything fell apart..

Susiana attacked. She attacked like her life depended on it. The Mara Pirates were closing in, taking out all of the members of her group. They were everywhere, to her left, to her right, in front, creeping up behind, snatching from below, or ambushing from above. The tanks, the ones who were supposed to take the damage for others, were long dead. The pirates then went after the mages. No matter how strong their spells were, they were outmatched by the speed and the quick thinking of the pirates. The Tricksters, the ones who used claws to fight the enemy, went down quickly. A simple scimitar to the head was all it took. The clerics tried desperately to use their resurrection spells, but the pirates caught on fast. They stabbed the poor healers before they could start their chants. The pirate's archers (Marlone Archers, they were called) killed every one of the group's archers they could see.

It was just Susiana, her cleric friend Tereigh and a few other survivors left. "Don't worry, Susi. I got your back," Tereigh said with a smile. Then her eyes widened in pain as a blade slashed her back.

"Hehe. I've got your back too, see?" cackled the Charismatic Mara behind her. She sheathed her now bloody sword as the cleric dropped limply to the ground. Susiana called for help.

"Anyone! Please! I'm surrounded! Help me!" To her despair, no one came. Susiana was surrounded and alone. The pirates mocked the archer. "Poor little girl, she's all alone now!" "You really dared to challenge the Mara?" "We'll hang your corpse on our ship for all of our prisoners to see!" "Your time ends here, little one…"

Tereigh managed to gain consciousness as she found her friend cornered. "No…Susi….please…no…" A tall, female pirate stepped forward, she was most likely the captain. "Foolish children, you always think that you can do anything, that you can conquer the world." She then turned to the pirates she was in charge of. "Finish her."

"N-no! Susi!" cried Tereigh. Susiana couldn't move; she was paralyzed with fear. The pirates crept closer, a sinister smile on their faces, their swords raised…

Slash. She couldn't take it.

Bam. It was too much.

Wham. Please, make it stop…

Pow. Make it stop…

Boom. Make it..

Slash. Please…

Wham. …

…

"SUSIANA!"

A.N: Okay, well that's finally done. It's a slow start, but I promise you, things shall get interesting. Next chapter coming up!