Alright everypony, this is my FIRST ever Fanfict i have ever made. -Deep breath- Whew, hope i have good feedback, this is how the Fanfic is going to work out, it's going to be made of Cases in which the very first part of every case is called the Incident, in which we describe the events of the crime as it happened, Then after that, it is the parts, next one will be called C.S.I. Equestria Case 1 Part 1. Every Incident will be short, but the actual Parts will be longer, so yeah, Enjoy!, Oh!, im having OC Submissions!, Leave them in the review with name of the OC and Specification i.e. Color, Cutie mark, Do you want him/her to be Victim or killer. And go read awesome Fanfics of my Friend Zach The Lone Alchemist, He posted Zach in Equestria and Pokemon Walking the Path, go read them and leave reviews!, Nuff said!
DISCLAIMER: I do NOT own any MLP materiel here, it is all property of Hasbro only OC's are mine and from other Ponies
I do NOT own the C.S.I Title! it is property of... Erm... ABC.. I think T-T Imma get sued for this, The point is it's not mine, Enjoy :)
C.S.I. Equestria Case 1 Incident
Tobias Colt just came from school, tired as always, every Thursday after school he usually stopped by Sugar Cube Corner for a treat before heading towards his house, Thursdays were the toughest days for Tobias, He went to school until 3:00 Pm and after that, he had guitar lessons at school and finally getting out of school at 5:00 Pm, "Time to clear my mind and enjoy a nice cup of decaf coffee".
He entered Sugar Cube Corner and sat in his favorite seat, next to the window and waited for somepony to attend, a pink mare with messed up, puffy mane with a cutie mark of three party balloons attended Tobias.
"Hey Toby!, Watcha want this beautiful afternoon?" Said the mare, taking out a notepad and a pencil from her mane.
"Can I have a decaf coffee please?, oh!, and can I have a banana nut muffin too please?" Said Tobias, leaving his saddlebag next to him.
"Sure!, be right up Toby!" Said the mare as she hopped towards the kitchen to get his order.
"Boy, what a day, so much stress!", he pulled out a poster saying "Vote Tobias for class president", "This class president stuff really is exhausting, well, at least many ponies are on my side, I'm pretty sure I'm going to win against Connor", he pulled out another poster from his saddlebag that said "Vote Connor for class president", "Hehe, he's more focused on taking over than actually being a great class president".
He placed both posters back on his saddlebag, the pink mare hopped towards Tobias's table, holding his order in a tray.
"Here ya go Toby, if ya need something else, yell out my name", Said the pink mare, setting Toby's food on his table.
"Alright, thanks Pinkie Pie!, you're the best" Said Toby, giving a hug to Pinkie.
"Aww, that's so sweet Toby", She hugged back and hopped back to the kitchen.
"Well, time to enjoy this", just as he was about to take a zip from his coffee, Pinkie Pie came back and placed some napkins on the table.
"Would you like to join me Pinkie?" Asked Toby to Pinkie, pointing at an empty seat in front of him.
"Sure!, why not?" Pinkie sat on the chair, taking off her apron.
"So, what's up Toby?" Asked Pinkie.
"Nothing much, just school and this class president thing, quite exhausting, but enough about me, how about you?, what have you been up to?" Asked Toby to Pinkie, taking a bite out of his muffin.
"Well, besides working and working, not much, quite tiring" said Pinkie, fixing up her mane a bit.
"Yeah, I bet it is".
Toby picked up his mug and was about to zip some hot coffee when suddenly it broke into shards, hot shards to be exact, scattering all over the place, some hitting Toby in the face, and a hot shard flew directly to Pinkie's right eye, making her drop to the floor in pain.
"What the f…"
Just before Toby could finish his sentence, a bullet broke through the window and impacted his head, penetrating his cranium and brain, falling dead to the floor, it took long for Pinkie to recover her senses and when she did, she saw the body of 18 year old Tobias Colt laying dead on the floor, Pinkie yelled and screamed, in shock, not believing what just happened.
"Mr. Cake!, Help!" Yelled Pinkie.
That is it!, Case 1 Part 1 will be up tomorrow!, im going to take a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong break after part 1 because of exams.. -Shudders- Exams, anywho, hope you liked the incident, Tobias Colt is a pony i created, yeah, Poor bastard, have a great night everypony! Brohoof! /)
