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So I Took This Story Down Due To Some 'Technical Difficulties' And I Had No Vision For Where This Would Go, But Here It Is Again With Some Slight Changes.
Ok, so this is my first story so I request CONSTRUCTIVE criticism only, meaning no flames. Also, I know this concept is overuse, but you know you love it really to you wouldn't be reading this right now.
Disclaimer: Veronica Roth Owns Divergent Unfortunately. I Just Own Some Characters And The Plot Of THIS Story. No More, No Less.
Now, On With The Story...
Tris POV:
As Christiana and I walk to the net to wait for the new initiates. I wonder if they will be like how we were 6 years ago, scared and anxious of what is to come. It's weird to think of myself now as one of the two Dauntless prodigies, as well as a co-head leader of a faction, along with Tobias, instead of that scared, little Stiff. Its funny to think that the Stiff everyone thought would be factionless came first, with the second highest (or lowest, whichever way you want to think about it) in Dauntless history.
A lot has happened in the past 6 years, beside from the leader thing. For example, Tobias and I got married a little over 4 years ago and were soon blessed with a little boy that we named Luke Mitchell Eaton. My baby boy is the spitting image of his father and is so adorable. Not only this, but I recently found out that Tobias and I are expecting another child, the only problem is that Tobias doesn't know yet. I found out the day before his trip, so decided not to tell him because I knew he wouldn't leave otherwise.
When Christina and I reach the net, we see Shauna and Marlene who agreed to help us with the tours as the boys were on a business trip to Erudite. Tobias as the representative for Dauntless, Will to help with Tech Support as he took over control of Intelligence, and Uriah and Zeke as defence/bodyguards (even though they can all take care of themselves, it is mandatory). They left a few days ago and are supposed to return at lunch today, but knowing Zeke and Uriah, they won't come back for another 3 days, minimum.
The girls and I are finalising our tour plan, when we hear the new leader, Nikki, do the speech. It would have been Eric but he, Peter and Jeanine Matthews were exiled shortly after I became a full member because they tried to use Dauntless as an army to wipe out the Abnegation and all of the Divergent, thinking that 1) Erudite should be the governing faction, and 2) that Divergents were going to be the fall of our 'perfect' society. Though it is now proved that they aren't a danger to our society, and I still don't believe that our society is perfect. It couldn't be farther from perfect, to be honest.
We wait a couple of minutes we hear a very high-pitched, feminine screech, before we see a blur of black and white. As I help the girl out of the net, I get a good look at her. She is quite lean. Also, she has jet black hair that falls just above her waist. Her eyes are an amazing shade of brown, even as they are wide and bright. This girl reminds me of someone, but I just put my finger on it. We all put on stoic looks before ask the girl the normal procedure question.
"What's your name?" I ask her as she studies her surroundings.
"Arm. Eh, well arm" she says as unsure of it.
"You do have an opportunity to change it now" I respond, smiling at the memory of Tobias saying the same thing to me. However, I quickly put on the hard mask I wore before, so that no one notices the smile.
"I choose... Rosie? Yeah, Rosie" She confirms with a small smile on her face.
"Rosalie? Is that you?" I hear, Christina I think, say behind.
"Chrissy? Oh Chrissy it really is you!" Rosie exclaims as she embraces Christina.
Shauna, Marlene and I leave the two of them to catch up, as we finish up lifting the initiates out of the net. After we get them lined up, we take a few minutes to scrutinise each and every initiate. This year we got 10 transfers and 13 Dauntless born.
From Erudite, we got:
James- He seems cocky, but not in a condescending way. He has curly, black hair and is very tall, about 5'10". He is rather muscular but also lean at the same time. He should do very well in the first stage due to his build but depends on if he decides to be a good Initiate or a bad one. He seems to be getting on well with the other Initiate, he must be a good initiate, right?
Michelle- Also seems to be a nice person. She has a very pale complexion, sort of like mine. She also has very long, straight blond hair, (A/N: Notice The British Spelling. BRITS RULE!) again sort of like mine. She is short, like 5'2". She is basically the the younger version of me. Its kind of scary. She is lean with little muscle, but holds a good, strong stance. Michelle looks like she will be good at knife throwing and gun work, not sure about the fights though.
Daniel- A very cocky person. He has the same skin complexion as another Initiate called Jordan but darker. He is medium height, so like 5'7" or 5'8". He has already tried to flirt with me, but obviously I didn't flirt back or anything. Told him to stop and all, but the dude didn't get the message. I can't wait Tobias to get back. Daniel Is Very Muscular but also very slow. It could go either way, I suppose.
From Candor, we got:
Roxanne- Seems to be a massive flirt. I swear if she flirts with any of the boys, I will destroy her. She is the typical teen, dark, long hair. As well as a sun-kissed complexion. She makes most of the initiates feel self conscious, you can tell by the way they stand but she will most probably be cut after the first stage. She is really going to get on my nerves, I can tell.
Eldon- Although from a different faction, he seems to be getting on well with Michelle. He seems to have a small crush on her by the way he leans towards her. DO I SMELL ROMANCE OR WHAT! He has spiky blond hair that has been cropped short. He is quite tall, near enough as tall as Tobias. Like Michelle, he is lean and slim. He could go either way, but you never know.
Riley- Also seems to be becoming friends with Michelle. She is short, about 5'0" with long brown hair neatly tucked back behind her ears. She is slightly muscular and has a strong stance. She seems to be very friendly and bubbly. She Should be an all-rounder when it comes to stage one. I hope she makes it far, she would make a good addition to Dauntless.
Rosie- Christina's mini-me. Extremely tall and lean, just like Christina. She should do extremely well, just like her sister. She seems to be trying to get on well with everyone, although anyone can tell just by looking at her she is shy. Just like Riley, Rosie is an all-rounder and will most probably do well in the first stage.
From Abnegation, we got:
Jordan- Seems to be a very nice person. He has mixed-race type skin tone (A/N: So Basically He Is Light-Skinned), but has bright, blue eyes that contrast heavily with his skin tone. He is Tall, but not as tall as Tobias. Probably 5'9" or 5'10", but what do I know. Jordan is quite muscular but not in a big way. Should be good for fighting, not sure about anything else.
Kelly- A quiet girl. She has mousey brown hair, and a long pale face. She seems to be very shy but also very respectful at the same time. She has barely any muscle and is very skinny. It is highly improbable that she will make it past the first stage, but who knows.
Bobby- A seemingly quiet boy, with a rather guarded look. He has shaggy dirty blond hair and is extremely tall, taller than Tobias tall. He is very skinny and lacks any muscles that could help in stage one. I seriously doubt that he will make it into Dauntless, but I could be wrong. I mean, look at me, I was the weakest and I came first. You never know the future.
I am disappointed to say the least. This should be an interesting initiation process the year.
There, Finally Finished. I Know Very Short But Still
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