Hey! :3 Sooo...this is my first fanfic, so try and be nice, mmkayyyy? (^-^)

I'm super obsessed with this particular manga right now, a d I've got loads of ideas, just bear with me ;)
Oh, yeah, this is basically an alternative version of the events in chapter 58 ( I think that's the one :P), so its quite a big spoiler if you haven't read it already. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED! Please no flames, but I welcome constructive criticism is welcomed :3 Enjoy! ~(¬.¬~)

Chapter 1- Give me Strength

She didn't know what to do. Kuronuma Sawako was walking home from school with her long-time boyfriend, Kazehaya Shouta. A few weeks into their relationship, Sawako, with much encouragement from her two best friends Chizu and Ayane, mustered up the courage to try and speed things up in their relationship. One day whilst walking home (deja vu :3) with Kazehaya-kun, she had reached her shaking fingers towards his, in attempt to hold his hand. However, when she was only a hair's breath away from reaching him, Kazehaya had seen her shadow upon the ground, arm outstretched. Spinning to face her, shock written all over the brunette's face, he caused Kuronuma to recoil away in complete embarrassment. She had apologised profusely, and put her hand to her face, eyes squeezed shut in an attempt to keep in the tears. Kazehaya stood flustered on the spot, unsure of his next action, until she stammered out "Please, don't hate me..." He then realised that his next move was clear. With a small blush insistent on spreading over his face, he took Kuronuma's hand, with her still clinging to her school bag. By now, both of their faces were acting like they had minds of their own, trying to will them to let the blush that threatened to engulf them take over. But, neither succumbed to the 'force' shall we say, and both managed to look as calm as you can whilst trying to keep a blush at bay. They had carried on walking home, hand in hand, until they bumped into Kuronuma's mum. The unexpected meeting ended in Kazehaya visiting Kuronuma's house to eat dinner. Their relationship had progressed steadily from that point, until their second night on the school trip to Okinawa.

Sawako's POV:

Those were the thoughts going through my head as I walked behind my beloved brunette, the wind playing with his hair as it gently blew by. 'That night...that night, Kazehaya-kun, he...he...he tried to kiss me!' I thought, my heart racing as I recalled the memories of that fateful night, the memories that were somehow both painful and precious at the same time...

She had just been in the shower, and was walking through the corridor, Ayane's phone in hand. 'She must have left it in her hurry' thought Kuronuma, happily placing the phone in her bag. She stepped into the lobby to find Kazehaya waiting for her. In confusion, the raven asked him why he was still here, or if he had just got out of the shower too? With a slight red colour scattered upon his cheeks, ha had answered "How should I say this... I just wanted to see you..." As the words escaped the prison of his mouth, he collapsed into a near-by sofa in embarrassment. "I mean...no...hmmm...it's like that..." Seeing him struggling to put his feelings into words reminded Kuronuma of the day she confessed-she was unable to get one tenth of her love across. With an understanding, and slightly abashed look on her face, she sat next to him, giving him the curt reply of "Okay", knowing that he wouldn't misunderstand her short answer as a sign of annoyance, but rather be comforted that he wasn't the only one feeling plagued. The two ended up looking into each others' eyes and losing all sense of reality- all that existed were each other and the pounding of their hearts. Their cheeks were now blossoming with rosiness as Kazehaya put his hand to Kuronuma's cheek and said "C-close your eyes". Widening them for a second before doing so, Kuronuma was preparing for the action about to come. When their lips were but millimetres apart, who should walk in on them? None other than Ayane, in search of her 'lost phone'. Upon seeing the new arrival, the couple flew apart, Kuronuma unknowingly pushing Kazehaya away. The reddening brunette made a hasty retreat, and things between the two had become awkward and strained. Kuronuma didn't like it one bit.

'WHOA WHOA WHOA HOLD ON A MINUTE, DID I PUSH KAZEHAYA-KUN AWAY? IS THAT WHY THIS DARK AURA IS SURROUNDING US?' Kuronuma screamed silently at herself in realisation. Then she remembered where she was. The raven was walking behind the man of her dreams, and they were nearing a bench. With her heart quickening rapidly, she thought 'Please, Kami-sama, lend me your strength. I need to clear these misunderstandings once and for all'. With her silent prayer in mind, she took a deep breath and shakily reached out to grab the soft material of Shouta's blazer...

So, how was it? :P This chapter is mainly recap on the manga story line so far, but my draft for chapter 2 is finished and should be up in a couple of days. I know its short, but please bear with me? The next one is longer (^-^) oh btw:
Kami-sama- God/Lord
If you were wondering :3 please R&R! I need the constructive criticism :P

Thank you, see ya soon! (^-^)