Sooo ... first story *yay* This is just a little prolouge to introduce my OC a little. The story itself is pretty much just a retelling of the Anime but with my OCs. I'm acctually just writing this because I have these OCs in my mind and I like them so much that I just want them to have their story. So I'm not expecting this to become extreemly popular but I do would love some critique. So if you read through it, please leave a comment on what I could improve.
She had asked everyone. The Rugby club. The Baseball club. The Tennis club. Heck, even the Judo club. But she always got the same reply. No one of them agreed to lend their field to the soccer club. And who would blame them? The soccer club had only seven members which was four less than they needed to compete in actual matches. And if they had a match, the chance of them winning was extremely low. They had absolutely no experience and most of them had lost their will to train long ago.
Aki didn't hurry to the clubroom. She didn't want to tell them again that she couldn't get a field. Even though most of them probably didn't mind. It would have been something new if she did. But every time she came back unsuccessfully she felt bad. Because every time she looked into Endous eyes she could tell how sad he felt not being able to train properly. He, as the captain of the team, was the only one who hadn't given up on playing yet. Maybe it was just because he was in love with the game and would play even if he was alone, but it always cheered Aki up. For her he was the personified passion.
"Kino-san!" a silvery voice made the girl startle. She looked to her right where a girl had just passed her. "How's the soccer club?" Both had stoped and turned towards each other.
"Kihara-san ..." Aki mumbled half in thoughts. She needed a second until she realised that in front of her stood her classmate, Kirihara Meiko. She sighted. "The usual" she answered low. Meiko frowned.
"That's bad." Meiko replied. They sat next to each other in the classroom and often had small talk about club activities and other stuff. "Can I help you somehow?" Aki looked at the girl. Meiko was dressed in the tennis club uniform and had her black bob cut hair held back by a headband. In her left hand was a towel, in her right a Tennis racket. Aki shock her head.
"I don't think so." The manager had a slight smile on her face. "And you're already late for practice." Meikos green eyes widened.
"Really?" She tensed. "Katemasu-kun is getting so bossy lately." She rolled her eyes. "I'd rather help you than go to that hell of a practice" The black haired said. But then she waved for a goodbye and ran of.
Aki sighted. If Kihara just could help. If anyone could help. But it seemed unlikely that anything could. She just hoped her efforts weren't useless. Slowly she started walking again. It was time to tell her friends that she was unsuccessful again.
Soo ... yeah. That's it. Not quite sure when I'm going to update this but I want to put on another story too which I have in my head (no OCs). So if you like this (even though it's not much yet) look out for my other stories ;)