Hey Party People,
This is my first EVER Narnia fanfiction. and I'm ,like, SUPER syked. I've been reading Narnis FF's for the past month. And I've noticed almost all the fiction's are either Peter/OC or Caspian/Susan love thingiemabobers. So, I've concocted and story about my favoritest Narnian king EDMUND!! and an original character. I really hope you guys like it.
Now this chapter is just a prolouge, where you get to see why going to Narnia is so important for Alloria (the main character) and her Faun-nurse-nanny (a supporting character). The first 3 or 4 chapters are pretty slow but my the 4th or 5th chapter we will get some Ecmund/OC love going here.
Prolouge:
"And all the Nyads and Dryads dance with the fauns, And the trees sing sweet music all through the night, and it is so magical and wonderful you don't even notice how tired you are or how badly your feet ache from dancing all night-" exclaimed Lilah, recolling her days when she was a happy little faun, and she took things like dancing and parties for granted.
"And, then the trees will open up and you can see all the stars in the heavens sparkle as though everyone of them is sparkling just for you" added Alloria knowing the story her nursemaid used to tell her so well she could recite it by heart.
"And, sometimes if you listen close enough ,when everone is silent and just listening, you can hear the roaring of a lion silencing Narnia and sending it into a deep and heavy sleep." Finished Lilah, placeing a kiss on the top of Alloria's fair head, who smiled and snuggled underneath her covers sighing contently.
"Goodnight my sweet child" said the nursemaid, pulling the covers snuggly around Aloria.
Lilah moved to get up off the bed, but was stopped by a faint noise,
"Lilah?"mumbled an obviously very exausted Alloria. Lilah stopped and smiled knowing exactly what the young child would ask of her.
"Yes, my dear?" she answered.
Alloria barely opened her eyes and said contentley,
"Will you sing me the lullaby?" she, asked knowing exactly how Lilah would answer.
Lilah shook her head in a way that meant "why can I not say "no" to this girl"
"Don't you think Aladar might mind if I sang and woke him up?" questioned Lilah "I don't think I should"
Alloria sat bolt up right, her eyes now wide sea-blue saucers. She glanced at her golden retriever, Aladar, who had been named after Alloria's brother, who was in such a state of heavy sleep, if you hadn't known the creature was sleeping you would have thought it was dead.
"Oh no!" she exclaimed,"Aladar likes the song, you should sing it, so then he'll fall...into..deeper..Sleep?" she finished the sentance with a note of despare in her voice. She couldn't go to sleep without Lilah's lullaby. It was like an Eclair without custerd, or a chessboard with out a queen peice.
"You have to sing, you just have to" said Alloria, who was now looking at Lilah with such despare and sorrow it almost broke her little faun heart.
"Well if you insist" said Lilah, who pulled up a chair by Alloria's bed and began stroking her hair. "I shall sing"
Her voice flowed soft and melodious through the room.
Sleep my child, sleep away
Go to a place where children play
Run from all your misery
And envelope in Dreamery
Think of things that mean no harm
And rest inside your mothers arms
Know that someone loves you so
And will be with you whereever you go
So run my child, run away
Go to the place where children play
Run from all your misery
And envelpoe in Dreamery
Alloria was evenly breathing so Lilah assumed she was asleep. She got off the bed and proceeded to pick up her "Little Miss's room". It was one of her comforting past-times. The simple fact of being able to freely go around the room and examine the childs dearest possesions was extremely senimental and calming to Lilah.
From Allie's little sword (a gift she was given from her brother, for her 11th birthday) to Edmund, her shaggy golden retriever (who was named Aladar after he had gone away to war and he sent her a puppy to remind Alloria of him on her birthday).Everyone of those items was special to Lilah, and she cherished them almost as much as Alloria did.
She gazed out the window of the childs room and a frown sauntered across her face. As much as she loved the little girl she cared for she hated Morbiddain. The land on which Alloria and Lilah currently resided. It was a cruel and heartless land full of religious corruption and failing monarchy. Why just today little Alloria had gotten struck by her own father because she had tried to nurse a sick wounded cat back to health.
Lilah tucked a strand of hair behind the sleeping girls ear and she could visibly see the deep gash whose wound started on the side of Allie's forhead and made its way down to her ear and curved around the base of it. The gash was surrounded by a purplie-yellowish bruise. Alloria winced at the touch of Lilah's hand and turned in her sleep a bit.
Lilah sighed and wiped a few tears away that had escaped from her eyes. She loved this little girl like her own daughter and any harm that came to her was like a knife being stabbed through her own heart.
She was about to get up when she heard Alloria's covers shift. She faced Lilah and said faintly
"One day Lilah, we shall go to Narnia and when we do we shall be happy and dance... until our feet...don't hurt" and then she closed her eyes and Lilah knew she was finally asleep.
She got up off the bed quickly so the child would not hear her cry. She could not help it. She wanted Narnia. She wanted her family and she wanted the beauty of it all. And she wanted Aslan.
'Oh Aslan", she cried "please help me.
But, she knew Aslan woud not help her. Aslan did not care for her any longer, and she knew it And that just made her cry harder.
So, Yea this is it. The rest isn't that dark. I just had to instill the amount of pain and suffering both of the main girlies have in store for them while they are in Morbiddain.
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-Maddikinz940