Hi This is My first story so it would mean a lot if you guys would be straight with your criticism. Thank You!
"Hey I am back" said Chi
"Hey Chi''
"Welcome back Chister"
"Welcome back Chi dear"
"Yo Bro"
The seventeen year old had just come back from his work. Pick Pocketing. You heard me. Pick Pocketing. Chi once had an uncle who died because of old age. Only his aunt Aiko was left with his twin sister Lia, who is an awesome earth bender like him, his younger brother Tanaka who is a master water bender and older sister Aisuru who is a fire bender, though Tanaka and Aisuru weren't related to Chi and Lia they loved each other like anything. Under then the fact they were really poor and they steal sometimes they were a part of a pro-bending team The Tigerdillos. And they were pretty good players. Chi/Lia are the earth benders (no one could see the difference between them), Tanaka the water bender and Aisuru the water bender and the captain. "So Chi you do remember today is the day the Order of The White Lotus goes around The Earth Kingdom and tries finding the next avatar." Says his twin "Of course, I know, you idiot" replies Chi. Lia scowls and says, "Well if you are the avatar then General Khatra will be at our doorstep" "I know, I know for what Avatar Korra did it to her father Amon or as we all commonly know him Noatak" says Chi
Yeah I know it very short but please help me in making it better BTW I am looking for a beta reader