Hey everyone! I thought I would try a new story, seeing as I am currently stuck on inspiration for my other one as of now. I hope you enjoy this, although, I would like to express the idea was not mine. I will put the info for the original at the end. Let me know what you think! Love you all!
"Jade, I don't wanna go in there…" Tori said worriedly.
"Oh! Don't be ridiculous, it's just a silly horror-story house." Jade replied, her hands sitting on her slender waist.
"I know," started Tori, "but I always believed in the stories." She admitted reluctantly, causing Jade to roll her eyes.
"André, would you like to go in with me?" Jade asked.
"Nope! I'm, uh…busy?" André stuttered.
"Okay, fine! Cat? Would you? I'm not even going to bother asking Robbie, he's just a coward." Jade huffed, beginning to get a little frustrated. Robbie tried to object to Jade's insult, but she just skillfully ignored him.
"Uhmm…" Cat began, "I, uh, I dunno, Jade. Is there bibble in there?"
Jade shook her head in negation. "Oh, then…I don't really wanna go in…" Cat finished skittishly.
Jade walked in through the grand front doors. Looking around, she spotted many cobwebs dotting the ceilings and upper walls. The house would only allow so many visitors in at a time, so it wasn't extremely busy.
Jade made her way to the formal living area. Of to one side of the room was a beautiful grand piano. She looked around the room, upon seeing it empty, she crossed the dusty floor towards the instrument.
Before Jade could even reach the piano, the room echoed with the notes of a classical love ballad. Jade suddenly stared towards the keys of the piano and noticed several keys moving up and down, as if being played by an invisible force.
Jade quickly backed out of that room, smirking to herself, Jade's next stop on her tour was upstairs. She strutted to the long, creaky, staircase, careful to not fall while climbing it. Once she reached the top, she saw a long, empty corridor.
Jade looked, first to the left, then to the right, deciding on the direction she wanted to go. She decided to enter the room at the end of right side. Upon entry, she noticed it was an immaculate, and beautiful bedroom.
Jade walked towards the bed before noticing the lace of her boot was untied. So, she sat down on the neatly made bed. Before she even got a chance to bend over, something or rather, someone, pushed her back into the middle of the bed. Jade couldn't move at all. She tried pulling left, pushing right, squirming and wriggling around the bed, but nothing helped. She was pinned down tight by the invisible force.
This must be what was playing the piano downstairs earlier. Jade thought. "Yes, it was I who was making the beautiful melody you heard." A masculine voice said. Jade strained her hearing, but was unable to tell where exactly the voice came from. Just then, she heard a dark laugh coming from the room.
Suddenly, a handsome man appeared above Jade. He had dark brown hair, and the sexiest face she had ever seen. He was wearing a button up shirt with no buttons done up so Jade could see a well defined, but not over the top, chest. "Who are you?" Cried Jade. "Ahh, my beauty, do not worry, I will not hurt you." The man soothed.
The man had Jade pinned tightly underneath him, with his hands holding her wrists tight against the mattress. He then shifted enough to pin her wrists down with just one hand, leaving the other to start a different task. "I am Beck. I am the demon to guard this home my family once lived here, as did I. We were happy then. But that's when my father discovered my mother's unfaithfulness. Everything went down from there. Her murdered me in front of her before killing her. Later, he killed himself with a blade dipped in our blood. It was all very gory, but after, I was cursed to reign immortal until I found my purpose." The man said. Jade just stared at 'Beck' incredulously.
"D…d…demon?!" Jade stuttered out.
Beck nodded. Jade suddenly shivered. She glanced down to where she felt his hand glide. He was gliding his free hand up, under her black shirt. He kept going higher and higher until he felt the silky line of her black push up bra. Jade shivered again. She stared into his eyes as he gently massaged her breast.
Jade sat up in the king sized bed. She pushed Beck off of her enough to gracefully remove her top. While she did that, Beck started playing with the hem of her jeans. Toying with them and gently tugging at them. When Jade pulled him towards her face by his hair, he roughly unfastened the buttons and zipper on the offensive denim garment. He quickly pulled the jeans down her legs, throwing them across the room.
Beck tore off Jade's panties, and set to work in making her cum hard. He licked all around her hole and sucked hard on her clit, before plunging his tongue deep into her core. He kept thrusting it in and out of Jade's soaking core, making her cry out muffled screams of pleasure.
It only took about 10 minutes before Jade came crashing hard. She was panting and sweating while struggling to catch her breath.
Once Jade finally caught her breath, Beck pulled her up and flipped her onto her hands and knees. He grabbed a fistful of her hair yanking her head back towards him after throwing off his own jeans. He lined his cock up with her throbbing centre before plunging himself in hard. Jade screamed out in surprise and a little pain at the initial penetration. Beck didn't seem to notice though as he continued to ram into her fragile body, eliciting gasps, screams, and moans.
Jade's body could hardly keep up with the demonic pace which Beck was using to screw into her. She had already orgasmed a total of 4 times in the last hour and a half and was about to cum again. Beck pulled her backwards on the bed so he could stand up to fuck her. With the change in angle, Beck was now hitting Jade's g-spot hard. On the second thrust against it, Jade was screaming Beck's name at the top of her lungs.
Beck ignored Jade's pleads to slow down to let her body recover. He kept pounding into her at a supernatural pace, creating yet another coil in the pit of her stomach.
Jade came once again, before passing out cold on the warm mattress. Beck noticed, but was far to horny to care, so he kept fucking her hard. He scooped up her limp body, placing her on her back against the pillows. Before ramming back into her core with a new depth. *SMACK* *SMACK* *SMACK*
Beck kept plowing into Jade's limp body until he was finally ready to release his seed. Before he did, he slowed down monumentally. Once he was hardly moving, he pulled out completely, submerging himself into her mouth instead. He repeatedly shoved his cock down her throat, slowly. Slowly, Jade began to come to. She started gagging on Beck's thick cock as he continued to fuck her mouth, twitching violently. He pulled out of her mouth then, only to renter her sopping core. He slammed his hips against hers with with lots of speed and force. Continuing this pattern until he finally decided to let go. Beck exploded with more cum than Jade had ever experienced before in her life. She felt it release from his tip, and shoot up, into her overworked slide. She released herself at the same time, resulting in lots of hot, sticky liquid covering them and the sheets.
Jade was panting hard, as was Beck. Now is not the greatest time to tell her about some serious issues. He thought to himself.
Beck pulled Jade's exhausted body close to him, cuddling her sweetly. For now, he would enjoy the moment.
Hey, so like I said before, I will be giving you all some information on this story here.
ORIGINAL WRITER: Fighter for the title
ORIGINAL STORY: making love with a demon
The reason I decided to rewrite that story in my own way was because the spelling, and English is VERY poor in the original. I loved the idea, but it was very hard to read through. I thoroughly enjoyed the idea, and wanted to see where I could take it myself. So I hope you enjoyed it, and if you would like to see more to it, let me know. Thanks a million!
Also, just a side note that "On That Fate Filled Day" is still on my mind. The reason it's not out yet actually has multiple factors. I'm going through a little bit of a rough patch again, had a best friend break up and boyfriend break up in the same week. Also because I am not finding the inspiration for it, and when I think up an idea, I don't have the time or the energy to write it up. So thanks for understanding! ~ Mel. XoXo