A/N: If you haven't finished reading Deathly Hallows yet, I wouldn't read this poem. Bit of a spoiler's coming up.


We had this connection, as all twins do

But to us ours went a bit deeper than most, I know that that's true

Now I've stumbled into the darkest and emptiest of dreams

Where something that I believed in wasn't all it seemed

And it's hard to believe that my best friend is gone

This whole situation just seems so wrong

And if I could go back in time and change things, that's what I'd do

Because every time I look in a mirror, all I see is you


I got several reviews on how to make this better, so I rewrote it. I'm not going to delete the original in case you like that one better. But here's a new one. It's a lot different.


You were smiling

I kept thinking you were going to wake up

Jump up and laugh at the looks on our faces

And you just forgot to clue me in on this one

We got home an you weren't awake yet

I was cracking jokes because I thought it hid my pain

Only everyone knew that I was hurting

So nobody said anything

They silently left to tell the rest of the family

But I stayed behind

Your funeral was beautiful

I didn't have a speech

How could I explain that you were my best friend

Out loud?

But no one will hear this

With a blank stare I looked down at you

And with each 3 second blink

I expect my eyes to open to yours

Only...they wouldn't

But you were still smiling


Is that any better guys?