Hello luvs :D
erika here and im writing my FIRST BAN FANFIC WOO HOO !
note my charater is a oc
I OWN NOTHING EXCEPT FOR HERRRRRR.
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so with that out of th way
i now intorduce my story
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Bankotus P.O.V
age:18 ;note he is alive
I had never really loved anyone or anything.
I was a mercinary, there was no time for those childish feelings.
Banyru was maybe the only thing i had to look after, and my men of course. But my men, my brothers were comradas. The seven of us had a similar love to kill which had brought us together.
My heart was never to soft to the eldery, children, or women when i killed them. As i mentioned before , i had no feelings toward others.
That was, until my eyes locked with those of the hit i was sent to kill.
She was about around the same age as I or maybe a bit younger. My misson was as usual , kill the village she lived in, make sure she and the whole village died , but I had to leave the village with information on the Tenshi Houskei means angel jewelwhich my hit target suposablly protected like the normal duty of the miko Kikyo with the Shikon no Tama. (sp)
My comrades raided the village as any other raid, setting the homes on fire, killing the inhabitants of the village same old same old.
They did however leave me the duty to find the girl and kill her.
"This might be a little easier," I spoke outloud as i spoted a near by shrine.
Obviously a miko must be inside the shrine, so i strolled up the stairs that headed into the shrine.
"Knock, Knock." My voiced lingered into the abandoned shrine.
I sighed, I guess i had to play hide and go seek with this miko.
Sound of breathing could be heard down the left corridor. I gripped Banyru and heading in the direction of the sound.
Shadows and sounds of quiet prayers were the first things i noticed as i waited outside the sliding door.
"Come out come out wherever you are.."
I lingered a moment then sladed threw the door with one swing of my Banyru.
Inside was eldery mikos.It was dark insided and i could make out a female figure at the front of the room dressed in traditional miko ceremonal robes.
"Heh found ya."
The eldery mikos shreek and pleded for me to spare the special miko's life.
But i had no time for mercy, i slashed all of them leaving me and the young miko at the front.
"Hmph might as well know that im here for the houskei, hand it over and your death wont be that bad."
No response.
That would always piss me off, when the victum thougth that they could be the brave maryter and die silent.
"I'M TALKING TO YOU WRENCH !" My voiced was raised and as well as Banryu.
I took a slash down at what seemed to be her arm, but what turned out to be a fake doll filled with hay in the shape of a women.
"Clever," I noted.
I could still sense a presnce in the room. The light of the moon and fire outside brighten the interior room and i was able to see small doors all around.
"Just have to pick the right one." Giving a grin a slashed Banryu threw the first door.
Nothing.
The second door.
Nothing.
"Okay now this is pissing me off."
Right when i said that movement of feet were heard and i turned.
"DIE !"
A loud femine yell was heard and i caught a glimpse of what looked like to be a sword swinging down on me.
In reflex, i put Banryu up to protect me.
I put force onto my Halbird and the foe was then on the ground.
"Fool." I walked a few feet foward to see my oponant on the ground.
It was a young woman. The miko proably.
"You did good by hiding away from me like that, but still thank you for coming out, ...now i dont have to find you."
After i stated that a pair of eyes glared up at me threw thick eyelashes. Those eyes made a mark on my soul.
They were a unquie evergreen, with patches of hazel that seemed to shine in the moonlight.
But it wasnt the color that made me memorizes these eyes, no, it was the determination and fire that was ignited within them.
I had never seen a person, a woman in fact, glare at me with no fear.
"You bastard , your soul will roit in the pits in hades," She spat at me.
She had energy and got up with her sword.
"Ha, as if you can defeat me miko." I taunted.
"I'd rather die knowing i fought, rather than sit around helplessly," her voice was strong with authority.
Man, i was in total shock. She had actually challanged my authority and spoke with her own. I gave her credit for having that kind of spirit, but her fight would end in vain.
I saw her stance and knew ,she was ready for a battle.
"Miko, You will die by my Halbrid."
She ran towards me and i swung Banyru to catch her off guard. I hit nothign but air.
Damn it, where was she.
I felt a small blade cut my check.
Crap she was fast, i had to admit that.
But i was faster. I grabbed her neck qucikly, took the sword then launched her fragile body across the room.
Thud !
She hit the wall hard.
I sauntered slowly towards her as she slip up the wall to seat her self against it.
"Bastard," she cursed.
"Hey, thats rude, and i just met you." I responded.
I knelt down to her level with Banyru on her neck.
"Now miko," i whispered with a deadly edge . "Where is the tenshi Houskei ?"
"Keh, Like i would tell you MURDER !" The passion and fire in her voice and eyes showed no let up.
I smirked and started sliding Banyru on her neck trying to hint that i had no problem to kill her.
She kept her eye contact with me though. Now that i noticed it, she was actually a very beautiful miko.
Ivory skin that made her eyes pop, hair that ran down freely like a river with its deep brown locks.
The silence must've given her time to think since she shot her hands toward me and sent a spirt engery wave toward me. Damn it shouldve seen that one though.
Banyru did cut her a bit and blood did start dripping down her neck. Fear didnt even creep into her iris.
I sighed, i would have to kill her the hard way.
With banryu at her heart now, i asked her once more, "Miko, where is the houseki."
"No way in all of heaven am i going to tell you, i will die knowing that the houseki is safe and OUT OF YOUR HANDS !"
And with that i sent Banyru thrusting threw her heart.
I still remember her facial reaction when the halbrid went and penitrated her body.
She gave me a curse glare and then her eyes soften. Her body went numb and then fell to the ground.
Dead.
I squated down to examin her eyes once more. I didnt even know this brave but stupids miko's name. Her face was peaceful though, all her anger had vanished and left her with the serene look but blood spatered.
"Miko, you did die in vain, but i will not forget how you , of all people , were able to fight and because of that you at least earn SOME of my respect." I spoke as if she was still alive.
After the raid, the man who hired us to retrive the houseki was infurious and had even put a price
on killing us.
We wandered around the entire east and northern lands causing distruction whever we could. It was strange though, at moments when the earth and the sound seemed at peace the mikos eyes would pop into my head as if haunting me or just reminding me maybe.
My brothers, my comrades, died with me... twice. Our shame and infamous past was taken with us to the grave.
If i could ever do anything over agiain, or save a moment , or fix a moment, i would wish that i would've had the guts to spare the miko's life...
but who am i to talk, im a mercinary,
who never really loved anyone or anything...
or so i thought.
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
this chapter is sorta kinda like
a prologue but PLEASE
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-erika :))))