Please no incredibly long and pointless flames. I like to get feedback but not really mean stuff, but please give me your honest opinions. My story is SasuNaru, which i am addicted to. I thought of it when i was passing by a haircut parlor. This is probably totally original, and that is my goal. Let me know what you think. It is rated T for now but may turn to end later in the story.

Well, here goes nothing . . .

Kamikai

Uchiha Sasuke was your tipicle popular high school student. He had Ivory skin, dark as night hair, and not a single pimple had ever been seen on his face. All of the girls went crazy over him. He didn't understand why they just wouldn't buzz off when told. He didn't want to go through the trouble of having a girlfriend, until the day the knew girl came. He thought she was absolutely beautiful.

She had blonde hair, white-tan skin, Emerald color eyes that you could simply get lost in, and not a single pimple on her face. He never felt this way about a girl, but he sure as hell liked it. All the boys asked her out but she refused, that is until i asked her out, making the biggest mistake of my entire 17 year old life. She gladly excepted. She said she had been waiting for me to ask her. Her name was Mika, or "ka" r short, meaning "flower".

Sasuke had been growing his hair out long, because he simply was to lazy to cut it, that was until his "girl friend" made him.

"C'mon, Sasuke! Let's get haircuts! and after, we can go shopping!" She said merrily. He was really getting sick of that girl. She always wanted to shop and just used him as a caddy to lug around her shopping bags and what not. They got in the Mitsubishi Eclipse (that was owned by Sasuke of course), and were off to the haircut parlor.

They walked into "Mishu Kamikai & Shampu" (Mishu's Haircut and Shampoo). Sasuke trudged while Mika skipped cheerfully up to the counter where a stout man stood at a computer. "Herro howr can i herp roo? (how can i help you), he said, attempting english, but with a terrible japanese accent. "Were here for haircuts!" Mika said, popping out from behind Sasuke. "oh, herro ka, roo want de rusual?" (you want the usual?)

"I do, but Sasuke wants his cut off about 6 inches and then spike it in the back! He also needs his bangs trimmed." Mika said happily. Why does that girl always answer for me? jeez . . i got to show her who is boss sometime . . .

"Rokay! It wrill be weady in ren mrinutes!" (jeez this guys remids me of scooby doo . . .) The man said and walked off behind some curtains.

------Ten Minutes Later-------

"Rokay! re'er ready for roo!" The man said. While he passed, he read the name tag. It said "Iyounioi". What a bad name . . .why would someone name there child "odd smelling?". He tought as he headed to the shampoo area.

As he headed back, a certain boy caught his eye. He was sitting in the waiting room chair. He had a lightly tanned complextion, sun-kissed blonde hair, and blue eyes that looked like circular swimming pools. Another characteristic was the spiral earing that adorned his right ear. Wow . . . He's hot . . . What the hell are you thinking? . . . you're not . . . into guys . . .

Sasuke thought, but admitted he had seen a couple of guys that he thought were quite good looking. Alright . . .maybe I am? . . .What is it to you? Sasuke thought again, but realized he was just talking to himself. He walked further back and found an empty shampoo stand. He lay back and got his hair scrubbed, and then went off to the haircut stand. He sat in the dark gray, rock hard chair, and leaned his head ack into the headrest.

While he was leaning back, he noticed a certain blonde haired boy walking toward the stand next to him.

The mysterious boy sat bown in he chair next to him. Saske could feel his cheaks heat up. What the hell? Why am I . . .Blushing? . . The great Uchiha Sasuke never blushes!

The blonde boy looked over at him.

"Hi there! I am Uzumaki Naruto!"

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Yes, kind of a dumb cliffhanger, but i have to go do math homework . . . Review . . . Please . . .I need them to survive. Press the small button that says "Go" on it. It personally told me to tell you that.