EVERY NEW PARAGRAPH SWITCHES POINT OF VIEW FROM DAMON FIRST THEN TWO BONNIE SECOND.
Chapter One
"Hey! Stop! Please get off of me!" I heard her scream as I sat in the shadows watching the men try to take her. I couldn't help her, I wouldn't! Vampires didn't do that sort of thing! It just wasn't in my nature to help her. I thought. Plus if I helped her she would just figure out who I am and she would never want to know me or even be with me at that. Wait, what the hell am I thinking this! She is just a stupid human and another one can replace her just as fast as she leaves. Humans are for feeding and that is all they ever will be, but I couldn't help but think…
"Scream all you want. No one here cares about you or wants you alive." The first man said. "Please! Let me go! I didn't do anything to deserve this." She exclaimed. "None of our victims did." the second man said cockily while smiling the biggest smile I have ever seen. I felt my eyes widen and all I could think about doing was screaming. "Help! Please! Anyone! Someone! Please!"
When I looked up I realized she was staring straight at me. I started to get up and walk away but I heard her attempting to whisper. "Plea… Please help m… me." I couldn't imagine anyone that would want to hurt my pure "uccellino". I ran as fast as I could and was by her side in less than seconds. I grabbed the man that was trying to take off her clothes and snapped his neck. I felt him fall lifelessly out of my hands and thump straight on to the ground. I heard her scream but I couldn't stop. I grabbed the other man trying to run away and threw him straight into the bar they had just taken my "uccellino" from. She had let out a gasp as she watched me.
I tried to stand up and succeeded. I picked up my shirt off the ground, put it on and turned to walk over to my hero. "Thank you… for um… saving me earlier." Now I couldn't help but notice that he was the most handsome man I had ever met. He had dark wavy raven like hair, the most deepest color of black eyes I had ever seen and his skin was the most perfect shade of tan I had ever seen. He started to turn away from me and I tried to quickly hide the frown that was forming on my face. "Please don't turn away from me. My name is Bonnie Bennett and I would really like to repay you for what you have done for me tonight… I don't know how and I don't even know your name…" I started. "My name is Damon Salvatore and I'll see you around. Okay?" He said very coldly. All I could do was nod even though that made me want to burst and in tears right in the middle of the street. Without a goodbye or even eye contact he was gone with the wind. I started to walk back in to the cold and dark city of Mystic Falls, Virginia.
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