Chapter 1: A beautifull root
Little note: Hey guy´s, this is my first fanfiction, so please don´t be too rough with me xD I´m doing my best to improve my writingskills as fast as possible, so please tell me what i could do better ;) Oh, Undertale by the way don´t belong´s to me ^^ It belong´s to the annoying dog err... i mean Toby Fox ;D
Oh, before you start to read:
The writing-style drastically improved in chapter 9.
Don´t slam your fist into the desktop, just in cause of the first 8 chapters ;D
It´s a beautiful day outside.
Birds are singing,
flowers are blooming...
On days like this, normally nothing happen´s in the area around MT. Ebott.
"Dang it, why am i even climbing this mountain?", a girl asked herself.
She´s named Frisk, and is around 16 years old.
She wear´s a blue shirt with magenta stripes, blue jeansshorts, white kneehigh socks and brown shoes.
She has brown hair, that is barely able to cover her neck, and and her eyes are nearly closed.
"Right, i saw that little goat-kid in my dreams, that told me to climb this mountain.
Well, guess i´m slowly getting crazy...
I´m dreaming about animals, which are telling me to climb a deadly mountain, and i´m starting to speak with myself!", she complained.
After a few more minutes she reached the top of the mountain, which had a really deep hole in it. "HOLY, what´s that?!", she asked herself, as she stood in front of the reason, why noone comes back alive, after climbing mount Ebott.
"It´s so beautiful! It´s so nice...", she whispered whilst looking at the most beautiful thing she ever saw in her life.
"It´s a... It´s a...", she was so impressed, she wasn´t even able to finish her sentences.
She walked straight forward, to reach it.
"It´s the most beautiful root, i´ve ever seen! Wanna... TOUCH IT!", she yelled, as she walked straight forward to the root on the other side of the hole.
One step...
Another step...
Just one more step...
"AHHHHHHHHH! I´M BLASTING OF AGAIN!"
The root look´s, as if several humans have already tripped over it, and have fallen down into the hole in cause of that...
Well, Frisk is the first person who has fallen down, because she wanted to reach that root.
Yo... It´s the first chapter, i don´t think i´m able to pull more out of the question, why Frisk has fallen into the hole ^^ Next charpter´s gonna be a lot longer ;)
So long, that your rage quitting before your done with the half of the page...
And then your gonna ask me if i could make ´em shorter...
And i´m gonna say: "NO!"! Muahahaha... I´m so evil :D
Oh, and it would be nice if ya tell me, if i did any grammar or spelling mistakes...
I triplechecked everything, but mistakes can happen ^^
Anyway, hope you enjoyed it X)