Alright - first attempt at writing Free!, so let's move on with this fail oneshot!

Claires & Icing - Jewelry shops. Payless - Shoe shop. Macy's - Clothing shop.

With that out of the way, I don't own Free! nor any of the shops listed!


From behind her, her olive-haired boyfriend clutched bags against hiis hips, labling differents names of stores; Bath and Body Works, Claires, Icing. She had insisted she could carry her own belongings, though Makoto was having none of that, managing to swoop up the shopping bags before she could.

She turned on her heel, purse swaying with her movements, "Come on, Mako-kun! Let's go in Payless!" She paused beside the sign claiming BOGO! to allow the tall boy to catch up.

He smiled, taking her hand once next to her, "Alright, [Name]-chan." he agreed, letting her drag him inside.

Makoto Tachibana, boyfriend to [f/name, l/name], part of the cutest couple at Iwatobi High, Captain of the swim team, had taken the day off from training to take his wonderful girlfriend out; after eating, he'd taken her to the mall, at first to pick up her necklace for their one year anniversary, though it had ended up being a shopping spree for [Name], who'd only wanted lotion from Bath and Body Works - then perfume, and, well, sheesh, she might as well get the matching shower gel and hand sanitizer. She'd darted into Claires and Icing before Makoto even knew she'd gone from his side; and then Victoria's Secret, buying such lacy and erotic garments that Makoto had to excuse himself before a certain area in his pants could become visible.

Lost in his thoughts involving the pink-striped bag held in his girlfriend's hands and the underwear inside it, Makoto hadn't noticed her slipping on silver, glittering stilettos until she stood, towering above her normal height.

He hesitated, blinking green eyes, before smiling, "... You're really tall, [Name]-chan."

She laughed, sitting her purse down beside the Victoria's Secret bag, "I'm still not as tall as you, Mako-kun!"

Still laughing, the girl attempted to twirl in her shoes: losing her balance, she stumbled into Makoto, sending the both of them into a rack of shoes.

Makoto caught her by her elbows, holding her against him to take the impact - she landed in his chest, every curve of her fitted together with his. His face turned mortified when her hand brushed against him; as she pulled away, a lump in his pants was growing. [E/c] orbs looked him over at his pained face before settling there - she stared for a moment, heat rising to Makoto's face in both shame and humiliation.

Finally, she kneeled, removing the high heels and sticking them back in their respected box, slipping her own shoes back on. Grabbing her bags, she turned and waved a hand.

"You should of said something, Mako-kun!" she chirped, before turning once more, walking away, "... I'll be waiting in Macy's changing room, alright?"

He stood, watching her walk away: when he finally realized what she'd said, his face flashed a brighter red and he jogged out after her, attempting to cover himself with shopping bags, doing his best to ignore the uncomfortable sensation down there.

"W-wait, [Name]-chan!"


... I feel like Mako would be a closet pervert, okay.

Or maybe I've just read too many fanfics.

Oh! And Bogo is Buy One Get One, if you didn't know!

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