Claustraphobia Chapter 1, a harry potter fanfic

so I was trying to write more in my story whole new world when this little scene popped into my head. I know the adopted thing is kind of . . . . ok a lot clichéd but I wrote it anyway so deal. tell me what you think and hopefully it's something good. no flames please and enjoy.

Disclaimer: don't need one I'm J. , just kidding I don't own any thing but my storyline and even that's not a lot.

It was a beautiful day at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The sun dappled grounds were filled with students celebrating the end of exams. For Hermione Isadora Granger it was a time to lay out on a blanket in the sun and read books on personal interests. Her friends had long since abandoned her in favor of going for a swim in the black lake. It was in this state the Draco Malfoy, Theodore Nott, Blaise Zabini, and Pansy Parkinson found her. Deciding to go in for a bit of teasing Theo called for her attention "Mudblood, hey mudblood" nothing, she didn't even bat an eye. Theo tried again, this time he drew out the syllables in a sing-song way. "Muuuuuudblooooood, oh Muuuuuudblooooood." People, taking notice of what was about to happen and hoping for new gossip started to surround them. Deciding Theo wasn't doing the job right Blaise took over.

"Hey look! It's the Mudblood swot. If you look closely you just might be able to spot facial features behind that mane of hair." Pansy decided to add her two cents

"Awwwww! What's the poor muggle doing out of her habitat? Did someone take pity on it and free it?" she snickered and looked to the boys for approval. Which she got. Hermione decided it was time for her to leave so she stuffed her blanket and book into her bag and proceeded to move towards the castle. Seeing that she was trying to make her escape the group of Slytherins moved in to surround her. Hermione spun, she was trapped and the close circle of bodies was not helping her claustrophobia.

"Mudblood"

The cries came from all around her, overwhelming her senses and the small space making it hard to breath. Suddenly a previously unheard voice piped up from some part of the circle.

"Going somewhere swot?" she turned and came face to face with a familiar ferret.

"Malfoy" she ground out from between her teeth. Then everything went still. All were waiting for the confrontation they were sure would come. Then Pansy let out one more mudblood comment and 'Mione lost it and started in on a rant

"That's it you freaking pureblooded pig-snouts, I've had it with you're stupid mudblood comments. Don't you think you should check if who you're calling a mudblood is and actual mudblood? That's right you prats I'm fucking adopted so get you're facts straight you egotistical swine!" Hermione's eyes widened and her hand flew to her mouth in shock. She hadn't meant to tell anyone that she was adopted let alone the entire school. The grounds were completely silent. Harry, Ron and Ginny who were heading towards the confrontation in order to back up 'Mione stopped in their tracks.

"Is it true?" Ron asked sounding hurt. Hermione turned.

"I'm sorry guys I hadn't meant for you to find out this way I, I didn't know how to tell you and I just didn't want things to change."

"So it's true" it wasn't a question but she nodded anyway. It's true.