Ok so this is my very first fanfic ever. I will admit starting out with something such as this isn't probably the best start, but hey I can write pretty well in my opinion. So cut me some slack and please let me know how I did and what I can do to improve.
Ok so this is about an Umbreon who goes through a tough time trying to get the girl of his dreams, but little does he know he's in for a quite the journey. Our main character, obviously the Umbreon, will start out as an Eevee as well as the other characters and life moves on from there. I hope you enjoy reading in what I hope will become a successful series.
Here are your characters:
Breo: A shy Umbreon who is in love with a Glaceon named Krystal. However he is picked on and shunned for his very small stature.
Krystal: She is the treasure of Breo as well as just about every other male Eeveelution in the forest. A very caring Glaceon whose main concern is her best friend Breo.
Blaze: A cocky Flareon who always finds joy in putting down our main pokemon Breo. He also tries hard to get with Krystal, but for one reason only. He's going to be our main antagonist.
Blade: A shy Leafeon who will become one of those minor characters in the background.
Mochii: A very energetic Pinky Pie-like Espeon who looks after Breo and even developes a crush for him.
Tiny: Breo's lil sister and a spunky Eevee who always sticks up for Breo, but doesn't realize her bravery shames Breo even more.
Yeah I know a lot of characters to keep up with, but trust me they'll keep the story interesting. First things first, let us get the intro over with.
Prologue
The sun was shining in the forest and as spring past summer set on the land. All the Eevees were coming out. "Krystal!" Breo said (some eevees were named for what they were going to evolve into depending on their parents. In this case Breo was born from 2 umbreon parents making him an umbreon).
"Hey Breo! How was your first hunting trip with your dad?"
"Oh it was kinda boring considering we couldn't find any prey, but me and pops had fun." Breo responded. Glaceon looked at him playfully, "Well that sucks, wanna go by the cove for a swim. Better hurry before Blaze and his asshole crew get the whole place to themselves."
Breo responded, "Yeah, sounds like fun, lets get a move on slow poke!"
They raced to the cove, and the cove is a sacred place him and Krystal found a few weeks ago, but Blaze soon took it over and it wasn't long until there was a fight leaving Breo with a long gash down his side. They reached the cove with a heavy sigh of pleasure seeing it was completely empty. Soon they jumped in diving underwater giving the Magikarp a quick scare for old fun. They swam around for what seemed like forever and soon the peace was ruined by an evil laugh, "Hahaha, look at this boys. Lil tiny Romeo is trying to kiss up to Juliet. This is too rich, hahahaha!" it was Blaze and his crew.
"What the hell are you doing here Blaze?" Krystal exclaimed.
"Oh just taking in the fresh air. I thought I'd go for a nice stroll and kick a tiny lil girl out of the pool, but you can stay Krystal." Blaze responded with a sly grin.
"Blaze, why do you have to be such an asshole to me? What did I ever do to you?" Breo said with a firm stance.
"That's the thing runt, I don't need a reason to mess with you. It's just too much fun to not do it".
Breo was in a fighting stance and growling at Blaze who stared at him with a cocky grin. "Look at this fellas, the runt wants to fight me. Ooo I'm so scared" he began laughing at Breo.
"I'll fight you for this cove Blaze!" Breo exclaimed.
Blaze only laughed at him and jumped down. Without any word said Blaze charged at Breo and tackled him to the ground before throwing him against the rock. Krystal began crying, "Guys stop! Stop fighting!"
"You heard the lady Breo, get the fuck out of my cove!" Blaze commanded.
"Come on Breo, it's just a cove." She grabbed Breo and wobbled off into the forest.
"Breo, are you ok?" He coughed up a bit of blood before reassuring her that he was ok.
"Breo, those guys are jerks. Promise me we'll be friends forever ok?" Breo blushed a bit before telling her, "Yeah Krys, friends forever."He smiled at her, and she back to him.
Well there's our intro. Now just to let you all know, our story is going to take place 2 years into the future and all the characters have evolved into their predicted forms. Krystal is a Glaceon, Breo is an Umbreon, Blaze is a Flareon, and a new character Blade who is a Leafeon. Not to mention Breo's parents now had a new eevee named Bree or as everyone calls her, Tiny. Enjoy.