Hey! This was written before Kindred Spirits came out! I had this idea and was going to send it to Butch when the following week I saw KS! So, I thought I'd put the story up here! Before you start: this was written as a script NOT a book! The name of the character talking will come before the words. Quotes encompass said stuff and everything else is either thought or done! Next chapter I'll try and make it more story format if you want. Let me know! Oh, Reviews adored! MY 1st STORY! Alternating Realities. Here we go!
Chapter one: Pronounced Problems
Start: looks Fenton Works home outside
Danny Phantom: "AHHHH!"
Jack is firing at ghost boy. Danny dodges, He shoots Jack's weapon, so it flies away.
Jack: "You are going down!" pulls out ghost pistol and fires.
Danny P- "Leave me ALONE!"
Danny dodges another bullet. See Jazz in background.
Jazz: whisper "Danny! Imitates Maddie's voice "Jack! Jack dear! Come quick."
Jack: "Maddie! I'll be right there!" turns to Danny "As for you, YOU HAVEN"T SEEN THE LAST OF ME!" Jack runs inside.
Jazz: saunters out to meet Danny " You're welcome."
Danny P- "Thanks." Danny flies behind a car and turns human.
Jazz: man Danny looks depressed "What's wrong Danny?"
Danny F.- "My life."
Jazz: "What do you mean?"
Danny F.- "Being half ghost, never having time for myself, always being attacked, even by my own parents. . . Pick one." Danny sat their on the Fenton steps to their front door. His arms sagged, holding up his low hung chin, making a sad 'X'.
(NOTE I think I'll try and make it more story now. OK?)
Jazz: "It's ok Danny, I understand. And how do you feel about that?"
Danny F.- "No Jazz, You don't understand!... And don't pull any of that Psychology stuff on me either." Danny said as he walked up the steps, turning his back to his sister. "No one understands…"
DANNY PHANTOM THEME SONG!
I know It's really short, but right now I want feed back! Should I write it as a script (my initial way, because I wanted to send it to Butch) or should I make it story form? Let me know! Don't worry Ch. 2 will be up really soon, as soon as people review!