Chapter 1: preview
Clarence PoV:
Aberdale was a neat place, I say was because things changed. I used to enjoy going to school, but we really don't learn anything anymore. It's not even a safe place for kids. Ms. Baker doesn't teach anymore, in fact, I still don't know where she is. A lot of people disappeared after... after what happened. School isn't a place for learning anymore. At school you only do physical working jobs. Not like in PE either. They force you to go and work on things such as building fences. It's like slave labor. If you don't do as told, they whip you. I haven't been whipped yet, but sumo has. He says it's the worst pain in the world. The reason For the school system changing... is because of war. Turns out aberdale was actually owned by another country, and America didn't want to give it up. And it wasn't just us in aberdale, other places near us were also owned by them. They started out forcefully moving us from our homes, but a lot of people went into hiding and weren't abducted. When they realized this, they used it to their advantage. They made sure that we couldn't leave. After this many families were... disappearing. Some say that they were killed, but some say they are alive and are being... well a lot of things. Now the ones that are still here are treated like trash, and put to work. My friend sumo, and my friend Jeff, are still here with me. Thank the lord. They are also still with their families. Other friends of mine, such as Julien, Were separated from their families.
Sumo PoV:
Yeah, there was a war. A lot of people died, a lot of people are sad. Now we are put to work. I used to think school was bad, now I know for sure it's one of the most awful things in the world. Clarence used to be a happy go lucky kind of guy, Now he is different. He has realized that not everything or everyone is good.
Some of the work that they make us do is tending to crops, harvesting animals, And building things.
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