When I go to veiw my story, the thingy to go to another chapter is gone on Chapter one. I don't know what's going on. Just change the /1/ at the end of the URL to /2/. If you've got any idea how to fix this, please tell me.
Alright, so here it is, chapter one. Aleu Toumoku is owned by me, Katie. Sasuki Uchiha is owned by my friend, Ashley, and I've been given permission to use her in this story.
The story was really her idea. The real chapter one is missing because she has it. I wanted to edit it to add my character and before I knew it, I was hooked in typing.
Tsunade calls the ten kids into office to announce that they'll be staying in a mansion for a month, paired two to a room, and gives no reason.
That's not all this'll have, though. Like I said in the summary, I'm working on ending the month and going into missions and stuff.
And, as Ashley seems so concerned about this, there isn't anything going on between Sasuke Uchiha and Aleu Toumoku. They just get along well. At first.
Oh, and I might not be doing Tsunade right. I don't know. I'm only where Shonen Jump is.
R&R
Nine ninja stomped into room 101, the loud display of feet showing how ticked they were at the unfairness of such a punishment.
Detention. And three days straight. They couldn't have missed more than fifteen minutes of school.
Each slumped into different seats, spread out about the room. Sasuki turned to her brother, Sasuke.
"You know, if she'd of woken us up, we wouldn't be here," she hissed.
Sasuke slouched further, annoyance clear on his face. Sasuki wouldn't shut up all day about how awful Aleu was for leaving them asleep.
"I get it, already, all right? It's not like I've got any control over her," He muttered.
Sasuki narrowed her eyes at him, then spun around, turning her back to her sibling and starting a conversation with Neji.
It didn't last long, as Tsunade marched in and slammed a stack of paper down on an old, wooden desk that stood in front of the students, queuing silence for them all.
"For two hours today, you'll be writing about why you are here. Continually. No breaks," she announced, staring hard at all of them.
Sasuke slumped so low his chin was level with the desktop. The others began to mimic him, sliding down into their own seats.
"Then, you'll continue tomorrow. And the day after that, for a total of six hours," moans interrupted her, but a sharp glare shut them up, "Six hours is a long time, I'm sure you've figured. I expect this to be one lengthy essay."
She snatched the pile back off of the desk and handed it to Shikamaru to pass around.
"Great," Shikamaru sighed, handing them over his shoulder to Kiba.
Half an hour later
Sasuke glanced over to his sister's work, which was two pages longer than his. He frowned. Sasuki was writing feverishly, her pencil tearing across the paper. Sasuke knew everything she was writing was putting the blame squarely on Aleu. His paper was bashing Sakura, as Sasuke was still thoroughly ticked with being awoken the way he had been this morning.
A loud whirring sound that had long since become an easily ignored drone to the kids chewed and spat out the sound of papers rustling and pencils scratching.
"Your pencil's sharp enough, Naruto," Tsunade finally said, slamming down paperwork she had been looking over.
"But, it's not!" whined the boy.
"Sit!" Tsunade barked. Naruto obeyed, hanging his head. His hand was already shaking from what little work he'd accomplished.
An hour and a half later, back at the mansion
"She's probably sleeping," muttered Sasuke as the group walked up to the door of their temporary home. All the way home, Sasuki and Sakura had been planning ways of getting revenge.
"Then lets pour ice cold water on her!" Sakura proposed, lifting two clenched fists.
"How about gasoline, then set fire to her?" Sasuki growled, snatching the key out of Sasuke's hand as she shoved past him, unlocking the door herself, as apparently he was taking too long. Sasuke scowled.
Aleu was sprawled out across one of the couches facing an open window, very much resembling a sunbathing cat. And, indeed, she was asleep. It was obvious what had tired her out. Everything shined in the summer sun; polished, dusted, washed. Things where in perfect order, every piece of furniture exactly where it should be, every cushion and painting straight.
And, a twist; she'd taken off that blinding red sweatshirt that always accompanied her.
Sasuki skidded around the couch to face her, Sasuke, Sakura, and the rest following her at a slower pace. The black haired girl suddenly got a maniacal grin on her face, but before she could carry out her unspoken plans, the other Uchiha reached forward and tickled her would be victim.
Aleu woke with a start and sprung up, blinked, then frowned and laid back down. Great, the house was full again.
Sasuki scowled at her sibling. Sasuke replied with a smirk.
Sasuki turned on Aleu. "Thanks for waking us up, Toumoku," she barked.
"Oh, shove it," Aleu responded groggily, taking a pillow and holding it over her face,
"Three days of detention! Three DAYS," Sasuki screamed at her, getting more ticked with every passing second.
"YEAH," chorused Sakura, Naruto, Tenten, and Kiba.
Hearing this, Aleu pushed off the pillow to reveal a more chipper attitude.
"Three days? You mean, I'll have the house to my self for two more days?" Aleu asked her, wanting to be positive of the good news.
"YEAH, YOU'LL BE LAZING AROUND WHILE WE FINISH OUR SIX HOURS OF ESSAY WRITING," Sasuki shouted, infuriated that Aleu was happy with the news.
Hinata scampered away up the stairs, too timid to take all the yelling. Shikamaru followed her, also bothered by how loud it was getting. He wasn't as annoyed by detention as the others, as he really didn't have anything better to do, and probably would be serving longer than the rest, as he hadn't even started his paper; he'd just spent the time daydreaming, as he would have been had he been at home. Sasuke, bored, turned to the kitchen to find something to eat. The rest remained, glaring at Aleu.
"Excellent," Aleu sat up and crossed her legs, grinning at them.
Sasuki threw her hands up in the air and let out an exasperated cry.
Aleu hopped off the couch, put on her sweatshirt, and followed Sasuke, thirsty.
"You know, you could of woken yourselves up," Aleu sung over her shoulder.
Naruto had a miniature spasm attack, then bulleted up the stairs.
Sasuki and the others stomped after him.
Kitchen
"Mess up my cabinets, and I'll break your skull, Uchiha," Aleu warned him as the boy opened a cabinet.
He frowned at her, but this time carefully went through the cabinet.
"Good boy," Aleu muttered, opening a different cupboard and sizing up all the different glasses.
How many options did a person need? She took a tall, thin glass out then turned to the fridge, which seemed to span half of the wall.
She filled up her glass, then walked into the living room, taking up a perch on the windowsill, which was oversized like everything else in the house.
"Nice job, by the way," Sasuke said, dragging his hand on the top-most shelf of the entertainment set that was within his reach as he passed her, heading toward the stair well.
Aleu pulled a face that carried a frown, but held hints of a smirk.
I'm honestly at a lost to where to cut off chapters, as I haven't been typing it in sections. So bear with me. I apologize if things seem chopped off.