Hello readers. I had an idea about a story but I really want some feed back on it before I continue with it. It's a story spin-off of the video game series halo. I was thinking what would happen if the war ended. Would species of the planets at war, be able to visit / live on each other's planets? Well that's what I want to write a story about. It will be about an elite named... well I really haven't figured that out that yet, but the story will take place in a real town in Ohio. I really want some feed back on this idea. I'll even let someone name the mystery elite, possibly even the main human charter. Please comment. Thank you.