Wow I looked on my profile and realized I haven't written a story in almost a year. The last I was on this site there were around 200 stories and now there's over 800. When we reach a 1000, we should throw a newsie party!!!
This is gonna be a Mush story. I haven't written one about him and thought I'd take a stab at it. Hopefully, it won't stink and everyone will like it!!!! Now if you do think it's lousy, then please tell me nicely, but do tell me so I will be able to try and improve it.
Disclaimer~ Newsies belongs to Disney, and new characters in the story of course belong to my insane mind. On with the story....................
Sabrina was getting ready for her date that night. She had met a nice boy and could hardly wait until his arrival.
She curled her long wavy brown hair, and tied a ribbon in it.
Sabrina was wearing a white long dress, one of her favorites, and a white hat with beads on the front.
"You look lovely dear," her father commented smiling, as his daughter entered the living room.
"Thank you father," she smiled appreciatively.
Sabrina lived with her father, her mother had left them three years ago when she was at the tender age of thirteen.
She longed for her mother, and prayed every night that God would return her, but so far she hasn't come yet. There was still hope, she would always say in her mind.
There was a knock at the door around seven pm, and my father went to answer it, as I sat nervously on the couch.
"Sabrina, Mush is here," my father called me over as Mush handed me a rose.
"It's lovely," I had my father put it in a vase in the kitchen and promised him I wouldn't be out to late.
We ate at Fred's Cafe and afterwards, decided to take a stroll towards Central Park.
"Have I mentioned that you look beautiful tonight," Mush held my hand as we walked in the almost deserted streets.
I giggled, "only ten times," we both laughed.
This was our second date, and we just seemed to instantly click. I had told him about my family and he told me how his father had left him and his mom to fend for themselves. When he was only 10, his mom died from heart problems, since they didn't have enough money for medicine. That's when he had met up with Jack and decided to become a newsie.
We walked to a little pond that was on the edge of the park, and gazed at our reflections on the water.
A gentle breeze was blowing, as a strand of Mush's hair fell on his forehead, which made me want to run my fingers through his curly hair.
"What would you do if I kissed you?" He asked suddenly looking at me intensely.
Not waiting for an answer, he slowly bent his head towards me and lightly brushed his lips on mine to see my reaction.
Realizing that I hadn't pulled away, he kissed me a little harder, and pulled me to him as my arms went around his neck, cherishing this sweet moment.
"Sabrina it's six thirty and you need to be at the factory in thirty minutes," her fathers voice woke her. "I'll be ready in a minute," she sighed.
The dream felt so real, like I could almost feel Mush's lips on mine. I had seen Mush and other newsies as I would be making my way to work. One day, a couple of weeks ago; a guy had come up to me asking if I wanted to buy a pape. I declined, telling him I was trying to save money.
We talked for only a few seconds, until one of his friends called him back. That's when I found his name was Mush. The name had been carved into my head with happy thoughts, that I might see him again.
I walked into the kitchen and poured a glass of milk eating the eggs and sausage that my father had cooked.
I must of been daydreaming of Mush again, because I heard something fall on the floor. "Oh, oops," I said sheepishly as father looked at me with a warning look, however his eyes twinkled, and he went back to reading the paper.
Ok, now truthfully how was this chapter? Was it a little to mushy(hehe) or did it seem pretty good? I really would like to know what you think, so pwetty pwease review this for me!!!!!!!! If you review mine, I'll review yours ;) Do we have a deal? Are you bribing me Joe?!!!