Water Cut Chapter 1. The Mission
Hello people of fanfiction!!! This is my first story on Fanfic wich I wrote before I even discovered this website. Please dont hate me or shoot firy balls of death that make me soak in my own misery and never write again! (wich means dont make me feel bad about what I wrote. But I need constructive critisism.) Anyways, reviews are always more then welcome! Enjoy!
Luv Sassyprincess
"One day I'll beat you Herry!" Said Archie, rubbing his side from where his friend had grabbed him. They were practicing their skills as they did everyday. Hermes burst through the doors of Ares' gym at that very minute. He looked a little frantic. " Jay, Cronus has been stealing chemicals of all kinds. Some of them are very dangerous. We need you guys to check it out!" Jay had a shine of enjoyment in his eyes as he instructed his team. Secretly, he loved missions. He wanted to defeat Cronus as much as everyone else, maybe even more. But he loved the adrenaline rush right before catching Cronus in the act. But this mission and the ones to come would not be filled with adrenaline as much as sadness.
The location was a large cave, right in the middle of the Medditeranian Sea. The team piled in the boat that Hephestus had made for them. Hera waved goodbye, and told Odie that the chemicals were most likely fatal when mixed together. " Just be careful." She said with worriement in her eyes. Odie nodded and the boat came on and sped across the sea, looking back at the goddess who faded into the dust. Archies face was green and Herry felt a little bit of sickness get in his system. When they reached the cavern, they left the boat silently, tying it to a stone pointing at the sun. They all took out their weapons, and as if planned walked in a straight line with Jay in the lead.
They walked for a while, but all they saw were rocks. " Guys, is it just me, or is it getting colder?" Asked Atlanta. " Yah, I feel it to." Jay agreed. All of a sudden, Neil screamed. Jay pointed his sword in Neils direction, prepared to fight. When he noticed the only thing there was Neil, he lowered his sword and rollled hi eyes. " What is it Neil?" He sighed. Neil had dropped his mirror and had backed away from whatever he was scared of. " That water tried to ruin my hair, and I worked so hard on it." Everyone sighed at his Neil moment as Neil walked cowardly back to the group, carefully making sure the path was safe for him and his hair. Jay looked up at the ceiling of the cave and saw frost on it. Thats weird. He thought. " Guys come see this." Shouted Theresa who was already on the other end of the cave. They ran to the exit of the cave, and instead of seeing water like they all expected, there was a forest, with a blanket of snow wrapped up every tree.
I am so sorry that the first chapter is really short and boring but I sort of clued you on when I said that the next missions will be filled with sorrow, or something like that. Please, reveiw!!!!!!!!!! I love all the people of Fanfiction, because they contribute to such an amazing website. I promise I will get the next chapter up and it will be so much more interesting. I promise. Luv Sassyprincess ( By the way, I love my name. Thank you to the people who didnt take it, so everyone!!!!!!!!!! 3 3 333333 )