This is a Divergent FANFICTION; I am no Veronica Roth, so none of the characters are mine. This story takes place where Divergent takes place, but there are some changes. First of all, the only characters dead are Al, and Jeanine Matthews. Eric and Max are in prison for treason, and traitorous acts. The war never happened, but was attempted. Caleb and Susan moved in together into dauntless compound and have a daughter, Rose. The couples are: Shauna and Zeke, Will and Christina, Uriah and Marlene, Tris and Four, and Caleb and Susan. Everybody has their jobs, and this takes place when Tris is 20, and Four is 22. So, that means it takes place four years in the future. Tris and Four are moved in together. Divergents are accepted in my version. There will be some violence, but that will take place later on in the story. Let the story begin!
Accepted (Divergent Fanfiction)
TRIS POV: Tonight is another 'Candor or Dauntless' party at Zeke & Shauna's place. That means I'll have to dress in layers. Just as I am about to start adding layers to my outfit, my phone pings as a text message comes in. I take a look and giggle.
Christina: Remember Tris, dress in layers, we don't want this to turn into an M-rated party.
Tris: I will, I promise.
Christina: Pass the rules on to Susan and Caleb! RULES: Dress in layers! Someone will say your name and ask you Candor or Dauntless. Candor means you have to tell the truth to their question, Dauntless means they get to dare you to do something. If you don't want to do what they say, you have to take a piece of clothing off, socks and shoes don't count! That's why you should wear layers!
Tris: I have a feeling Susan and Caleb will 4get and not wear layers.
Christina: Agreed. Four is coming 2 rite?
Tris: Y would he miss this?
Christina: True
Just as Christina's last message comes in, Four enters the room. He wears a black t-shirt and faded jeans, something most Dauntless wear.
"Whatcha doing?" He asks as he looks over my shoulder. I quickly hide the phone, looking up at him innocently.
"How can anyone trust you?" He asks playfully, as he takes the phone from me. I look up at him with puppy eyes and frown. He glances at the phone and then gives it back to me.
"I was texting Christina, it's not like I was planning to kidnap Peter, though that would be a good idea-" I start, just as Four gives me a hard glare.
"It wouldn't be good if I had a criminal girlfriend, now would it?" He asks, handing the phone back, "You ready to head to Zeke & Shauna's?"
"I need to change, then I'll be ready. Can you drop me off at Christina's, I think she wanted to help me choose my clothing," I say, quite bluntly, as I grab my phone and stuff it in my purse, then grab my purse. Four, well, Tobias, drops me off at Christina's and then heads back home to change himself.
As Tobias drops me off at Christina's, the door opens to a screaming Lynn, smiling Marlene, frazzled Christina, crying Rose, and surprisingly calm Susan. As I walk in, everyone turns to stare.
"Here Tris is! Sit down, what do you want? Hair straightened or curled? Maybe crimped, or-" Christina babbles as she taps a chair.
"Anything you think is good, I trust your judgment," I say, calmly, as Rose walks over to me to sit in my lap.
"That's a bad idea!" Marlene chirps as she walks over to me to help Christina comb my hair.
After an hour and a half, Christina is done with me. I look in the mirror and gasp. I look…beautiful! Christina dressed me in a purple tank top, black shorts, black leggings, white dress, red crop-top, short black leather jacket, and black boots. With everything layered on top, it looks beautiful. Just then, Tobias, Uriah, Will, Caleb, and James (Lynn's boyfriend) come to pick us all up to head over to the party. When Tobias sees me he smiles and takes my hand, leading me over to Zeke and Shauna's.
At Zeke and Shauna's there are already five people there, Zeke, Shauna, Lauren, Isabel, and Jess. Everyone takes a seat, mine being next to Tobias and Christina. The first person to ask someone is Zeke, since it's his house.
"Uriah, Candor or Dauntless?" Zeke asks, a mischievous grin appearing on his face.
"Knowing you, you already have a dare for me, so Candor" Uriah says, everyone gasps, Uriah never chooses Candor.
"Hmmm…who is the prettiest girl in this room?" Zeke asks, smiling once again.
Uriah takes a second to answer, looking around at all the girls in the room., "Four." I break into laughter, it takes Tobias a second to realize what Uriah just said, but once he does, he laughs as well. Uriah takes a couple seconds to find his victim, eyes finally falling on Four.
"Pretty girl, Candor or Dauntless?" Uriah asks Four. Four points at himself questioningly and Uriah nods.
"Well since I'm now a preeety girly-girl I'll go with Candor!" Four says, doing his best to imitate a girly-girl voice.
"Pansycake! Umm…who was your first girlfriend?" Uriah asks, laughing at Four.
"Gina Song, she was in my initiate class. We broke up right before Tris' initiation," Four says, the news about Gina isn't new. When we were first together he lied, saying he hadn't been with anyone, soon after he confessed when Gina came to visit. I have to admit, Gina is prettier than I will ever be. She has long black hair and tan skin. Her eyes are hazel, and her nose isn't too thin. She has very demanding facial features and is a great fighter.
"Tris, Candor or Dauntless?" Tobias teases.
"Dauntless!" I answer almost immediately, hoping no one realizes my excitement.
"I dare you to have everyone here try the cookies you baked this morning," He says with a grin on his face. I quickly run to our apartment, grabbing thirteen cookies, then head back. When I get back, I dose out the cookies and watch the gagging begin.
"These are absolutely terrible, who knew Tris was such a bad cook?" Christina asks as she mimics puking for everyone there.
I know I'll get payback on Christina for that move. "Christina, Dauntless or Candor?" I ask, looking her right in the eye.
"Dauntless, c'mon Tris, you know me well enough to know I'd rather be dead than to say my ex-faction," Christina says, a grin beginning to appear on her face.
"All right then. I dare you to get another tattoo, the tattoo has to be of the word 'fear', and a moth," I grin devilishly and wait for an answer…