Well, this is obviously a new story. I kinda had the idea in a dream (imagine that, a writer getting an idea in a dream, that's so never happened before... *snorts*)

Anyway, you read the description and this is the story to go with the description... since I'm probably not making sense I'm gonna stop talking now...

Please Review!

Disclaimer: I actually don't own Stargate: Atlantis *people gasp* I know, how horrible! I wish I did though... ahh, Joe Flanigan... (aka, John Sheppard)

New Planet:

"There's nothing here," complained Rodney, shaking a vine off his shoe.

"You were the one that detected the energy signal," replied John.

"Yes but I didn't say: let's walk blindly into the forest and see what happens!"

"We are simply seeing what is here Rodney," said Teyla, turning her head slightly to face him, "we cannot leave without knowing anything,"

"Fine..."

"It's only until tomorrow McKay," said John, "and we won't be in the forest for all that time,"

"But we'll be here for most of it,"

"Probably,"

"Great... I did bring my sunscreen right?"

"Yes Rodney,"

"Good because I have very fair skin,"

"We know,"

"It burns very easily,"

"Yes Rodney, you've told us," said John, not even looking back.

"Well it does," persisted Rodney. He suddenly jumped as he heard Ronon shoot something from behind him, "what was that for!?" he exclaimed.

"I saw something move," replied Ronon.

"It was probably an animal,"

"Let's keep moving," said John, "we have to find this power source... and set your gun to stun big guy, we don't want to kill any villagers,"

"Right," replied Ronon, pressing something on his gun.

"Something has happened here recently," said Teyla, scanning their surroundings.

"Wraith attack?" asked John, turning to face Teyla.

"No, something else,"

"How can you even tell? We're miles away from the village," said Rodney.

"I think we should continue moving onwards," continued Teyla, ignoring Rodney, "and we should not do anything to disturb the environment,"

"Like what? What could possibly happen from disturbing the--"

Rodney was cut off as a loud rumble filled the team's ears.

"This isn't good," said John, "okay, that's it! We have to go, now!"

"Go where?" asked Rodney, just as the ground trembled underneath them and gave way.

oOo

"John?" called Teyla into the darkness, "Ronon? Rodney? Are any of you here?" Teyla frowned as she got no answer. She quickly stood up, wincing as a sharp stabbing pain made itself known in her arm, "John?" she called out again before starting to walk forward into a small tunnel, "Rodney? Ronon?"

oOo

"Ow..." complained Rodney as he slowly opened his eyes which were squeezed shut, "that hurt," He slowly sat up and looked around his surroundings. He was in a small cave that was blocked by rocks on three side and the other has a long tunnel leading out of it. "Ow, ow, ow," he said clutching his head, his eyes widening as he felt something wet, "not good,"

oOo

"Stupid rock," said Ronon to himself as he pressed his hands against a wall of rock, "that's it," Ronon stepped backwards and shot the rock with his gun, but it had no effect except the ground seemed to tremble.

oOo

"Where... am I?" asked John as he looked around the tiny space he was trapped in. All sides were covered in rock and there was barely enough space to move, not that he could if he wanted to anyway. His leg was sticking out in an awkward position, obviously broken and his right arm wouldn't move. He had something sticking out of his stomach but before he could do anything about it, his eyes clouded over and his head dropped to his chest.

oOo

Teyla glanced around the tunnel. It seemed incredibly unstable yet very old. "This is odd," she said as her hand brushed over the rock and dirt, "very odd," She looked behind her and sighed before walking forwards.

oOo

"Not good, not good, not good, not good," said Rodney as he studied something on the tablet that he had on him, "not good," he repeated, staring at it in horror, "I can't have a few days air left! I have a tunnel in the wall!" Rodney groaned in desperation and let his bleeding head rest against the rock wall. "This is not good,"

oOo

Ronon growled as he circled the small cave like space. He also had a tunnel leading out of it but he wasn't sure to go in it or not, after all the others could be in the opposite direction, "that's it," he said, hitting the wall, "I'm going in," with that, he ran into the tunnel.

Okay, well it flicks back and forth after the 'fall' but starting next chapter it doesn't do that. It stays on one character... so yeah... please review...