Hey all, this is my first fic, so please R/R, and be honest, I can take
constructive critsim, but please review(hits knees and starts begging)
please, please, please, please,
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Oh and just so you know I have no intention of using my new characters in all of my fics and when I do I promise not to center around them. I personally hate when people do that. Some of my fics will also involve the main cast only.
Disclaimer: I don't own the mighty ducks, or anything related, however all original characters unless mentioned are mine. If I use someone else's character I'm sorry and if you'll let me know I'll change it or get your permission to use them and give you the credit you deserve, anyways, on with the story.
Description: A/U: What if Canard found Wildwing without Nosedive, so left him behind. What would he do? What would happen if he started his own team and ended up on Earth with the original strike team minus himself? What if Canard never ended up in Limbo?
Left Behind
(Back on Puckworld during the invasion)
Canard quickly pulled Wildwing into an alley. "Carnard,"said a surprised Wildwing, "You're okay" "Yeah fine, listen Wing, we have no time for small talk. Look, I'm forming a team of specialist to destroy the master tower and take down Dragaunus himself. I need your help." "Wow, that sounds great Canard, but I can't," "What! Why?"
"You know why, I have to find Dive." "Look Wing, be logical," replied a frustrated Canard, "The kid is probably fine, but if he's dead there is nothing you can do," Wildwing opened his beak to say something, but Canard held up his hand before he could. "Listen, don't talk okay? If Dive is alive, he could be any where. There is no way for you to find him. But you can still help him. If we defeat Dragaunus, then the planet will be free and he'll be safe." "Okay, you're right." They then gathered a team consisting of Mallory McMallard, Duke L'Orange, Grin Hardwing, Tanya Vanderflock, WildWing Flashblade, and Canard Thunderbeak as leaded. They fought, and ended up in a new dimension. As a duck fan you know the rest of that story.
Meanwhile Dive had similar ideas. He too, had gathered a team of specialist. First there was Blizzard McBill. He was a famous scientist known throughout Puckworld for his genius. He was a tall, and relativity young man, well in his early 30's, and was considerably hansom. He was a light gray duck with bits of white in his feathers, gentle black eyes, and white hair, hence his name. Next was Nightingale Featherwing. She's the team medic, in her late 20s. She has shoulder length brown hair that curls at the tips, white feathers, and green eyes. The third member of the team was Katana Walker. She had long waistline black hair, which she kept in a braid, silver eyes, and a silver streak, dyed of coarse, running right in the middle when her hair was down. She was quick, agile, and good with a saber thanks to years of training. Then there was Slapshot Drakeson, your basic military brat, but he was also a friend of Dive's. He was of basic height with tan feathers, blue eyes, brown hair in a buzz cut, and was about 18 years old. Then of coarse there was their "fearless leader" NoseDive, which we all know and love. For those of you who don't know he's a 17 year old with shoulder length blonde hair, blue eyes, a brown patch across his beak, and white feathers. Making a team of 5.
Well, it turns out that when the others went through the dimensional gateway, it opened up another portal which transported the others to Earth a few weeks later, delayed reaction.
Present day on Earth:
The team, known as the Mighty Ducks were fighting Dragaunus, his henchmen, and a like a hundred hunter drowns. Needless to say they were in need of help. The bad guys had the upper hand, that was until they were bombarded by pucks from behind. After a short battle the drowns were destroyed and Dragaunus and company teleported back to the Raptor. Leaving only the two teams.
Both had their pucklaunchers pointed at the other team in various positions. Canard the leader of one and Dive the other. Presentally both teams were waiting on their captions orders. "Wing?" NoseDive asked. He saw him but wasn't sure. Wildwing immediately turned toward the voice giving Dive the only conformation he needed. "Weapons down," he ordered as he walked between the two groups. Seeing this Canard gave a similar order, his and Wildwing's attention on NoseDive. "Wing?" questioned a still unsure and disbelieving Dive after not seeing him in so long. "Dive, is that really you?" was Wings only reply as he to moved toward the center. Dive simply shook his head yes as tears ran down his face not able to do much else. The two then hugged one another, and after a few moments they gathered themselves. Then Dive finally spoke, "It's be a long time," "To long finished WildWing. "I'm confused," said Blizzard, "are they, we enemies or not?" " No," came Canard's amused answer after scanning the group with the mask, "they're brothers. It's been awhile Dive," said Canard as he stepped forward. "Who…" but Canard cut him off before he could finish, "What you don't recognize your old buddy?" "Canard, well I'll be. Sorry, I didn't recognize you with that, no the Mask." "The Mask?" "Yes, that's Drake Ducain's Mask, and don't tell me it's not." "Some how I'm not surprised" It was now that Duke spoke up, "As much as I enjoy this little reunion, shouldn't we go somewhere a little more private to talk and introduce ourselves?" "Agreed." So with this they went to the Anaheim Pond.
"A hockey stadium, nice," commented Slapshot; he was about to say more when Phil burst in. "Boobalas, where were you? You have, hey wait a minute, who are they. More importantly, do they play hockey?" Dive was now giving his brother a questioning look while his team was a bit startled as well as confused and the others were laughing. "Guys, I want you to meet feel, our manager," "Yea, just ignore him." Came Dukes voice, " and," finished Wildwing, "Phil of coarse they play hockey, they're from Puckworld." "You mean everybody doesn't play hockey?" asked Slapshot. "Not on this planet kid," answered Duke. "Phil, leave now," came Canard's voice, "or no more publicity stunts from any body. Got it?" "Gone boobala," "Now that he's gone we should introduce ourselves. I'm Canard Thunderbeak, and this is my team. Mallory McMallard, Duke L'Orange, Tanya Vanderflock, Grin Hardwing, and Wildwing Flashblade." Replyed Canard as each member stood as their names were called. "Nice, now it's my turn.. I'm NoseDive FlashBlade, younger brother of WildWing," he said gesturing toward his brother, "this is Blizzard McBill, Nightingale Featherwing, Slapshot Drakeson, and…"
"Katana Walker," interrupted Duke. "Exactly," finished Dive. "Related?" "My niece," "Oh, cool." "Nice to see you again uncle," she replied giving him a quick nod. "We'll have time for chit-chat and catching up later, but right now I have one question for all of you," "Oh and what would that be?" asked Duke. "Who should be the leader if we combine the team?"
Well? Please review and keep in mind that this is my first fanfic. If you have any ideas on how I should continue it please let me know. And just incase you didn't read what I said earlier I don't intend to put my new characters in all of my fics and I will center around the original characters. Please review and Thanks ^_^
Oh and just so you know I have no intention of using my new characters in all of my fics and when I do I promise not to center around them. I personally hate when people do that. Some of my fics will also involve the main cast only.
Disclaimer: I don't own the mighty ducks, or anything related, however all original characters unless mentioned are mine. If I use someone else's character I'm sorry and if you'll let me know I'll change it or get your permission to use them and give you the credit you deserve, anyways, on with the story.
Description: A/U: What if Canard found Wildwing without Nosedive, so left him behind. What would he do? What would happen if he started his own team and ended up on Earth with the original strike team minus himself? What if Canard never ended up in Limbo?
Left Behind
(Back on Puckworld during the invasion)
Canard quickly pulled Wildwing into an alley. "Carnard,"said a surprised Wildwing, "You're okay" "Yeah fine, listen Wing, we have no time for small talk. Look, I'm forming a team of specialist to destroy the master tower and take down Dragaunus himself. I need your help." "Wow, that sounds great Canard, but I can't," "What! Why?"
"You know why, I have to find Dive." "Look Wing, be logical," replied a frustrated Canard, "The kid is probably fine, but if he's dead there is nothing you can do," Wildwing opened his beak to say something, but Canard held up his hand before he could. "Listen, don't talk okay? If Dive is alive, he could be any where. There is no way for you to find him. But you can still help him. If we defeat Dragaunus, then the planet will be free and he'll be safe." "Okay, you're right." They then gathered a team consisting of Mallory McMallard, Duke L'Orange, Grin Hardwing, Tanya Vanderflock, WildWing Flashblade, and Canard Thunderbeak as leaded. They fought, and ended up in a new dimension. As a duck fan you know the rest of that story.
Meanwhile Dive had similar ideas. He too, had gathered a team of specialist. First there was Blizzard McBill. He was a famous scientist known throughout Puckworld for his genius. He was a tall, and relativity young man, well in his early 30's, and was considerably hansom. He was a light gray duck with bits of white in his feathers, gentle black eyes, and white hair, hence his name. Next was Nightingale Featherwing. She's the team medic, in her late 20s. She has shoulder length brown hair that curls at the tips, white feathers, and green eyes. The third member of the team was Katana Walker. She had long waistline black hair, which she kept in a braid, silver eyes, and a silver streak, dyed of coarse, running right in the middle when her hair was down. She was quick, agile, and good with a saber thanks to years of training. Then there was Slapshot Drakeson, your basic military brat, but he was also a friend of Dive's. He was of basic height with tan feathers, blue eyes, brown hair in a buzz cut, and was about 18 years old. Then of coarse there was their "fearless leader" NoseDive, which we all know and love. For those of you who don't know he's a 17 year old with shoulder length blonde hair, blue eyes, a brown patch across his beak, and white feathers. Making a team of 5.
Well, it turns out that when the others went through the dimensional gateway, it opened up another portal which transported the others to Earth a few weeks later, delayed reaction.
Present day on Earth:
The team, known as the Mighty Ducks were fighting Dragaunus, his henchmen, and a like a hundred hunter drowns. Needless to say they were in need of help. The bad guys had the upper hand, that was until they were bombarded by pucks from behind. After a short battle the drowns were destroyed and Dragaunus and company teleported back to the Raptor. Leaving only the two teams.
Both had their pucklaunchers pointed at the other team in various positions. Canard the leader of one and Dive the other. Presentally both teams were waiting on their captions orders. "Wing?" NoseDive asked. He saw him but wasn't sure. Wildwing immediately turned toward the voice giving Dive the only conformation he needed. "Weapons down," he ordered as he walked between the two groups. Seeing this Canard gave a similar order, his and Wildwing's attention on NoseDive. "Wing?" questioned a still unsure and disbelieving Dive after not seeing him in so long. "Dive, is that really you?" was Wings only reply as he to moved toward the center. Dive simply shook his head yes as tears ran down his face not able to do much else. The two then hugged one another, and after a few moments they gathered themselves. Then Dive finally spoke, "It's be a long time," "To long finished WildWing. "I'm confused," said Blizzard, "are they, we enemies or not?" " No," came Canard's amused answer after scanning the group with the mask, "they're brothers. It's been awhile Dive," said Canard as he stepped forward. "Who…" but Canard cut him off before he could finish, "What you don't recognize your old buddy?" "Canard, well I'll be. Sorry, I didn't recognize you with that, no the Mask." "The Mask?" "Yes, that's Drake Ducain's Mask, and don't tell me it's not." "Some how I'm not surprised" It was now that Duke spoke up, "As much as I enjoy this little reunion, shouldn't we go somewhere a little more private to talk and introduce ourselves?" "Agreed." So with this they went to the Anaheim Pond.
"A hockey stadium, nice," commented Slapshot; he was about to say more when Phil burst in. "Boobalas, where were you? You have, hey wait a minute, who are they. More importantly, do they play hockey?" Dive was now giving his brother a questioning look while his team was a bit startled as well as confused and the others were laughing. "Guys, I want you to meet feel, our manager," "Yea, just ignore him." Came Dukes voice, " and," finished Wildwing, "Phil of coarse they play hockey, they're from Puckworld." "You mean everybody doesn't play hockey?" asked Slapshot. "Not on this planet kid," answered Duke. "Phil, leave now," came Canard's voice, "or no more publicity stunts from any body. Got it?" "Gone boobala," "Now that he's gone we should introduce ourselves. I'm Canard Thunderbeak, and this is my team. Mallory McMallard, Duke L'Orange, Tanya Vanderflock, Grin Hardwing, and Wildwing Flashblade." Replyed Canard as each member stood as their names were called. "Nice, now it's my turn.. I'm NoseDive FlashBlade, younger brother of WildWing," he said gesturing toward his brother, "this is Blizzard McBill, Nightingale Featherwing, Slapshot Drakeson, and…"
"Katana Walker," interrupted Duke. "Exactly," finished Dive. "Related?" "My niece," "Oh, cool." "Nice to see you again uncle," she replied giving him a quick nod. "We'll have time for chit-chat and catching up later, but right now I have one question for all of you," "Oh and what would that be?" asked Duke. "Who should be the leader if we combine the team?"
Well? Please review and keep in mind that this is my first fanfic. If you have any ideas on how I should continue it please let me know. And just incase you didn't read what I said earlier I don't intend to put my new characters in all of my fics and I will center around the original characters. Please review and Thanks ^_^