This is my first short story! Please do not express negative thoughts only positive aspects that I could work on! Thanks, everyone!
Love of Hidan
Stumbling through the old abandoned forest, he could feel the eyes of peering strangers. Tightening his grip, he quickly jolted around to find a dark-haired gal. She was the most beautiful human he had ever seen. Her long hair caressed her curvy bod: going in and out of each soft curve. The purple blouse she was wearing made her eyes pop out even more that he had even noticed. He had remembered battling with her comrade's years before, and thought to himself "Why would she want to even look in his direction?" But as he stood there questioning whether he should speak with her or not, she softly whispered "Hidan?" "Is that you?" His face flushed with nervousness as she walked towards him with her questions. Hinata recalled how strong and powerful even the lift of his fingers sprung. She had heard of the fear his reign brought upon the village. They might would even slay her for being in his presence. But she couldn't help but wonder why this man of great power hasn't ended her life yet. Maybe he was waiting to seduce her and then do it. Who knows? "I could just ask," she thought to herself. She couldn't help but stare at his amazingly sculpted abs and a jawline that was for days. He was gorgeous. Hidan noticed the staring and at that moment, sucked up his pride and said "Jashin would love you…" Hidan lowered his large blade and dropped it to the ground, Hinata began to slip her jacket off revealing a black fishnet bra and matching thong. HIdan looked the other way for a moment, unassured of what was going on. After peering out of the corner of his eye, he couldn't take it anymore. As his red cloud covered cloak droppwed to the grass, the scars of past battles displayed. Hinata waltzed up to him showing off the curves she knew she had. Her thick hips swaying back and forth. She pulled her hair up into a messy bun, and picked up cloak and slipped it on. Hidan couldn't talk, move, well the only thing moving was the bulge in his pants. Hinata began to blush again as she noticed to ratherly large thing. Naruto was only a memory in her mind right now. She was stading face-t-face when Hidan grabbed her breasts and forced her to the ground. As he realized she was more conservation he took the cloak off of her and placed it on him, but as this was occurring he was slowly drawing his known circle of death on the ground. There were other uses for this jutsu. More pleasing uses. He went in for a kiss filled with lust as he bit her lip, tasting the sweet blood of this virgin. As the skeletal print came onto his body, Hinata grasped both sides of head and pulled him in for a makeout sesh. Every kiss tingled thorugh her body. As he began pushing into her, she cried out in pain. Every sensational feeling was magnetized for Hidan. Each and every thrust felt like constant goodness.
Let me know whether this is worthy or not lol, I love Hidan so very much lol! Fav character!