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Chapter I
James slapped the car keys onto the kitchen table, glowering at his wife. Erin calmly sipped her espresso, cupping the mug in her manicured hands. Putting it down carefully, she opened her glossy lips to speak.
"Wha-"
"Like you don't know!" James spat furiously across the table. "I fill up the f****** car twice a week so that I can get to work and back and so that you can take the kids to school. It's more than enough." He paused to take a raspy breath and scowl at the pristine woman sitting opposite him. "I filled the car up yesterday, an low and behold today, I barely had enough fuel to get home…"
Erin's eyes were brimming with tears. She was shocked at James' outburst. "I haven't even-"
"Shut-up and let me talk." James was shouting now. Erin's eye make-up ran as tears streamed down her face. She was rubbing her hands together nervously as if to squash and wipe away James' anger and their marital problems. She didn't dare make a sound.
"And, then…" James paused, gulping, "And then, I found this!"
He held up a blue and red striped tie, letting it dangle in front of Erin for a few antagonising seconds.
Erin spluttered and coughed for a few seconds, before tipping her head backwards and giggling drunkenly. She looked James' in the face and spluttered…
"You stupid – "