Okay, this is the first chapter. I've written loads more but I wanted some opinions before I posted anymore.

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Renesmee's POV

"Uhm, no, I want to go home." I whispered.

"You're not seriously going to turn me down now sugar?"

"Take me home." This time I was fierce, I felt it, and I knew I sounded it.

"Fuck's sake" He growled.

But he did take me home, and I felt my chest loosen as we rolled towards La Push almost an hour later, he really had driven me out of my comfort zone but I felt at ease as we approached Jake's house. I knew I shouldn't consider this home, out of sheer respect for my parents but it was, because he was here.

"Thanks, uh, sorry for wasting your time." I mumbled the words insincerely and turned to leap from the car. He lunged at me, I couldn't even remember his name but he planted his lips on mine and I slapped him hard, tears already snaking towards my chin. The door opened behind me and I heard Jake's voice whisper; "C'mon Ness."

Instinctively I turned and curled into his open left arm, he carried me effortlessly and with his right arm, swung a perfect right hook at the boy, Tony, I remembered now.

"What the Hell?! Who the fuck are you?" he screeched.

"Get out of my driveway before I break your arms to go with that nose."

Jacob only had to murmur the words and tony was turning the keys in the ignition. Squealing down the road and out of sight.

"So you're just gonna break noses till I fall in love?" I whispered into his shoulder.

"If I have to. How are you Kiddo?" He still amused me with his use of nicknames, I was catching up with him age-wise and I didn't understand why he still thought it appropriate to call me juvenile names like "Kiddo" but I played along.

"Buzz off Old Man how old are you now?"
"25, just like always." His face turned abruptly serious, almost angry. "Did he touch you?"
"Ugh, Jake, c'mon!"

"I'm serious, I can still catch him up if he touched you."
"What if I'd wanted him to touch me?" Even as I spoke the words they were ludicrous to me, that was pretty unlikely. Jake's face paled, turning alabaster under the russet shades of his skin.

"Then I'm sorry I punched him." He replied in a withdrawn tone, he seemed hurt, which just confused me further.

"No he didn't touch me, and no I didn't want him to! Can I just go to bed?" I was almost angry now and definitely growing tired. It was gone midnight, late for a good girl like me.

"Yeah 'course. Kip in my room, Rachel and Paul are home. I'll catch the couch."

I nodded and kissed his cheek. "Thank you, again."

He stared at me for a long time, contemplating how to shut me up, most likely. "You're welcome, as always." And then he let me go. I'd forgotten he was holding me, it felt so natural. And I resisted the urge to moan and put myself back in his big warm arms.

Jacob had never seen me that way, unlike every other man, who just seemed to want a piece of me. As usual I bustled off, changed and crawled into his bed, it smelled of him and I leaned my face into his pillow, feeling the tightness in my chest at being away from him, and then drifting comfortably into a deep sleep.

My name is Renesmee Carlie Cullen. It's a mouthful, I get it! I am merely 7 years old, time wise, but I turned 18 last year and by the end of this year I'll turn 21. My granddad Carlisle says I won't get any older looking by then, and physically I'll stay a 21-year-old woman forever. Every Human Woman's Dream! I am a half-breed so to speak, my father and mother are vampires, but my mother was a human when I was conceived and born, my father being the only vampire on the planet with enough self-control to love a human being and not eat her.

Since I was born I have not spent one day without Jacob, my mom says he was very closely tied to her and feels protective of me, like a godfather, but when I asked why he wasn't simply declared my godfather, she'd replied "Uh, complications." And then hastily walked away from me.

I'd fallen in love with Jacob the second I'd mentally turned 15. When I told my mom she'd smiled a warm smile and sighed, quickly adding, "Uh, probably just a crush." She was always vague with issues regarding Jacob. I date every now and again but I have never in my seven years of life had as much fun with any one person as I have with him. He knows all about me of course, about my family. But I know he has secrets he keeps from me, I'll find them out one day, for now I'm happy with being his best friend,

no matter how much I love and adore him in all the wrong ways.