Two Destines one Soul Chapter 1, a great mouse detective fanfic

This is a story Masked Mouse thought of and that I volunteered to write, we do not own Great Mouse Detective, however Wrika, Erika, Dan and Carlin are Masked Mouse's and the small random mice like Terry or mine. =^.^=

Please Rate and Comment. And for a heads up some chapters may turn out 'Dark'.

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Two Destines One Soul

"One, Two, Three," Carlin, a 20 year old brown mouse with blue eyes and a pink nose said banging the drum sticks together symbolizing the start of the song. She wore green tank top and matching choker, short black shirt and white sandals.

The 21 year old mouse Dan, picked up his guitar and strummed with the drummer; he had short hair dark fur and he wore a red blazing shirt and black pants with matching black boots and had brown eyes and a dark nose.

Erika felt the beat with Wrika and both got there microphones ready; Wrika was a back up singer. She was 18 years old and had a black nose, light tan fur with short hair a red shirt black and red pants with matching boots and a chin hanging from her pocket to her bottom pant leg.

Erika was the lead singer; she was the really pretty one in the group and was the youngest of 17 year old. She had pale fur with green eyes and a brown nose. She had short light brown hair that was tied back with a black strapped dress, and she had a habit of wearing gentlemouse clothes.

Both Erika and Wrika put the mic's to there muzzles and Erika started;

"I'm in the business of misery,
Let's take it from the top.
She's got a body like an hourglass that's ticking like a clock.
It's a matter of time before we all run out,
When I thought he was mine she caught him by the mouth."

"I waited eight long months,
She finally set him free.
I told him I can't lie he was the only one for me.
Two weeks and we had caught on fire,
She's got it out for me,
But I wear the biggest smile."

Both sang together loudly, Erika maybe a little louder, this song made her think of Dan for some odd reason.

"Whoa, I never meant to brag
But, I got him where I want him now.
Whoa, it was never my intention to brag
To steal it all away from you now.
But god does it feel so good,
Cause I got him where I want him now.
And if you could then you know you would."

Just as the next part was coming Carlin stopped them.

"No, no, come on we've been though this guys, Dan you're getting off rhyme, Erika you're over powering Wrika on the main chorus. Now let try this again."

The group gave out a groan, they had been on this song for weeks now; even Erika, who really loved this song was getting tired of it.

"Come on Carlin if I have to do this song one more time today I'm going bust something open." He complained.

"Well then what do you guys think we should play until we feel like working on this one again?" Carlin asked a little annoyed.

Wrika shrugged, "I don't know, but I am a little thirsty."

"Yea me too." Dan added.

"Yea, come to think of it we all could use a small brake." Erika said in agreement.

"Okay guys, lets take a brake we all desire one." Carlin smiled, she was always sweet but the song just got on her nerves after a while…but they had to get it right and soon, they had a party to go to that wanted them to play the song.

All of them went into the house, which was Dan's. His mom and dad were at work so he had the house to himself with his friends.

As all of them started to go though the refrigerator Dan walked to the front door.

"Hay guys I'll be back just have to check the mail." He waved opening the front door.

It was no more then a minute when he came back, looking at something as if it was going to disappear from his paws.

"What's that?" Erika asked.

Dan wrinkled his nose, "It appears someone sent us a song in the mail."

The group all gave a look of shock, who in the world would give them a song in the mail?

"Well it gives us something to play until we are ready to play our song." Carlin replied.

The group nodded. "True it dose and it seems to have a very catchy beat." Dan added counting the beat. "And there is a copy for each of us."

"Let me see." Wrika said holding out a hand, Dan handed her, her copy then every one else.

Each one looked it over and liked what they saw…except Wrika.

She had skimmed the song then saw at the very bottom a warning.

"Hay guys it says here at the bottom under the copyright print that if you play this song you will be thrown into a different time."

The group grinned trying not to be mean to there friend.

"Come on it's just a slogan that's all." Erika said.

Wrika still didn't trust it but went with her friends anyways.

Soon the band of friends was ready to play.

"One, two, three!"

The group then began to play seeing just how easy the song was.

" When I was young, it seemed that life was so wonderful
A miracle, oh it was beautiful, magical
And all the birds in the trees, well they'd be singing so happily
Joyfully, oh playfully watching me
But then they send me away to teach me how to be sensible
Logical, oh responsible, practical
And they showed me a world where I could be so dependable,
Clinical, oh intellectual, cynical (oh intellectual, cynical) (oh intellectual, cynical)...

As the group played they stated to realize they could not stop….

"When I was young, it seemed that life was so wonderful
A miracle, oh it was beautiful, magical
And all the birds in the trees, well they'd be singing so happily
Joyfully, oh playfully watching me
But then they send me away to teach me how to be sensible
Logical, oh responsible, practical
And they showed me a world where I could be so dependable,
Clinical, oh intellectual, cynical"

"When I was young, it seemed that life was so wonderful
A miracle, oh it was beautiful, magical
And all the birds in the trees, well they'd be singing so happily
Joyfully, oh playfully watching me"

Once the odd song ended the friends found them selves in a new place….a place called Baker Street and a year that could only be 1897.

"What just happened?" Dan asked looking around and seeing all there band stuff was gone.

"I don't know." Carlin answered.

"Well I do!" Wrika started, "I know that song was strange, now we are in a different time, just like it said on the bottom of the paper that was a logo!" she snapped shooting Erika a look.

"Ok, okay, we need to clam down I know there is a way to fix this." Erika remarked holding her paws up.

As the group looked around again they saw a mouse who was in a detective outfit yelling at someone who was a bit fat and looked to be a Dr.

"Hay maybe he can help us." Dan replied.

"I don't know he seems kinda mean." Carlin replied back.

"Well it's better then sitting her doing nothing." Erika said heading over to the two.

As the team went up to the two in a fight Dan cleared his throat.

"Um, excuse me." He started.

The two stopped and looked at him in question.

"Could you guys be so kind as to tell us where we are." He asked with a cheesy smile.

The two gave a glare and then the one in the detective outfit remarked rudely.

"You're on Baker Street if you were to look up at a sign you would be able to read that."

Dan and the others took a step back, "Gee, sorry, I just thought you could help us." He answered.

The man gave a laugh, if you need help why not go see Basil of Baker Street, I mean your already here." He in a way mocked.

The fat mouse put his paws on his hips in annoyances, then looked at the group.

"I'm sorry, he is a very rude mouse, see Basil is not home right now and he thinks its funny, for its been two days now and Terry here thinks Basil is dead which he's been wishing for, for years now."

The group glanced at Terry the rude detective looking mouse.

Erika then whispered in Dan's ear, "Lets go…I don't like the looks of this guy."

Dan nodded, "Well thanks, we better be off now." With that the group walked off trying to find another person who could help them.

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So what do you think?