It Ends How It Began
Eragon finally spotted a black mass fly from the palace after hours of endless bloody warfare all over Uru'baen. He and Saphira flew fast in pursuit of Galbatorix. He and Shruiken landed on a small plateau. As Eragon faced the man who had destroyed his entire life,his vision tinted a blood red.
He charged,slashing madly at the insane king's head again and again. Galbatorix held his ground easily and warded off Eragon's wild blows. Then he used the Eldunari to break into Eragon's mind.
He forced Eragon back and knocked Brisingr from his hand. Eragon stumbled and fell. The king laughed his triumph. He thought he had won. And he may have if only he had thought to delve deeper into Eragon's mind.
In his arrogance the king turned his back to Eragon. Eragon pulled out another weapon that was nestled inside his left bracer. It was a small knife with a handle carved from a branch of the rowen tree he had hidden Saphira in as a hatchling.
It was embossed by the dwarves with silver. Set in the silver as a pommel stone, rested a piece of Saphira's egg on either side. Attached to the opposite end with enchanted leather from his first dragon saddle was the head from the arrow that he had shot at the deer just before Saphira's egg appeared.
He slid the leather cover off the end of the arrow head,the leather cover with the Seithr oil symbol burned into it. Galbatorix turned just as Eragon let fly this combination of his past.
It struck Galbatorix dead center of the chest,right into the heart. The formerly great king sank to his knees in pain as the Seithr oil ate away at his organs.
Eragon rose and picked up Brisingr and the blade of Vreal,which Galbatorix wore to the battle as an insult to the long dead rider.
Eragon remembered how Vreal had been bested by Galbatorix and drew back with the former leader's blade,and swung the blade into the dying king's groin. Galbatorix screamed in agony.
Eragon simply stood and enjoyed the king's pain as he stayed on his knees attempting to live. Just as he was about to die,Eragon removed the black king's helm,and looked him in the eye. He drew back Brisingr and fulfilled his oath to Rhunon. The body of the greatest tyrant in history collapsed.
He took the undamaged black armor from the king's corpse as a prize. He tore the strange knife made of his past from the king's chest. Then,he used his first spell to destroy the body. He said his blade's name and it ignited. He stabbed it through the kings body.
The body burned away leaving no trace. He picked up the king's head. He looked at it and said,
It Ends As It Began
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