This is my first story so critiques on my writing would be nice. Thank you for deciding to check it.
Bold- Locations
Italics- Memories
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-Manhattan-
Steve hit the punching bag harder and harder, with each hit a flashback of his life.
"There's not enough time I got to put in the water."
"Steve, don't do this. We've got time. We can figure this out."
Hit.
"I'm going to need a rain check on that dance."
"Alright, next week Saturday. At the Stork club." Peggy says while choking back a sob.
Hit, his frustration rises.
"BUCKY!" He shouts as his best friend falls to the icy ravine below.
Hit, he closes his eyes seeing his lover, his best friend, and his mother.
"I love you, my little star boy." His mother whispers into his hair for the last time.
The punching bag rips open flying across the gyms it's sand flying everywhere. Steve breathing heavily, he stares at the wall for a second and walks over to grab another bag, his mother's last words before she disappeared ring in his head along with Peggy's last request to him.
"Trouble sleeping?" Nick Fury stands at the entrance of the gym leaning against the door frame, his one eye fixed on Steve.
"I spent 70 years sleeping sir, I think I've had my fill."
"Then you should go out and celebrate. See the world." Nick walks up to Steve and hands him a folder.
"I went into the ice while we were at war, when I came up we said that we won. They didn't say what we lost. You here with a mission sir?"
"I am"
"Trying to get me back out into the world?" Steve asks, slowly opening the folder and looking through the pages.
"Trying to save it."
"Hydras Secret weapon."
"Howard Stark fished that out of the ocean when he was looking for you. He thought what we think, the Tesseract could be the key to unlimited sustainable energy. That's something the world sorely needs."
"Who took it from you?"
"He's called Loki. He's not from around here."
"The Norse god of mischief? He's real?" He walks over to a punching bag and the ground and lifts it onto his shoulder and starts to make his way out of the building with Fury.
"Very, you know the world's gotten a lot stranger since you went in."
"I doubt that anything other more than learning that my mother's stories about gods were true, could surprise."
"Ten bucks says your wrong."