Hello everyone! This story is set at a playground in Forks, a little while after he talks to Lizzie. (when Edward loans him the car & he searched for his imprint)I have a fairly long story line in my head, so bear with me. Sorry it's so short, I promise in the next chapter I'll develop the plot more. Thanks for reading, and I would really appreciate some feedback, advice, plot ideas, criticisms, etc since this is my first fanfic.
Portiana (pronounced poor-she-Anna) was experiencing a great difficulty concentrating on pushing her little sister Kianna's swing. Divirting her attention was a sullen, but quite attractive boy in his late teens or early twenties. The boy was currently sitting in his fancy older model of a car, focusing intently on a group of teenage girls near the swings. He soon lost interest, however, and turned his attention to Portiana. She had never been much for coyness; a tall, dark haired girl, raised with her mother's friends' two sons, (they had been the best of friends untill she dated one, and they broke up. Then the trio fell apart through pointless arguements and accusations.) Portia had learned to take advantage of her opportunities. So when the boy stared, she stared right back. Not only that, she hissed to her sister that she'd be right back, and began walking swiftly toward him. When she arrived at her destination, he raised an eyebrow at her.
"What do you want" he snapped, obviously in a bad mood.
"Well excu-use me. I'm not the one checking out random strangers at a playground. Pedifile much?" Portia had been raised with a snap-back sarcastic attitude, and she sure as heck was gonna use it. The boy though, simply exhaled loudly, rolled his eyes, muttered something under his breath, and turned back to the playground. He wasn't going along with her banter. When she continued standing there, he looked back.
"I was looking for someone."
"Did ya find them?" She asked, softening slightly. The boy snorted in response.
"I know most of the people around here, maybe I can help you.... What's their name?"
"Dunno"
"Okaay... what do they look like?"
"Again, I don't know."
"Soo... You're out here. In a playground. Looking for someone. And you don't know their name, or what they look like. How in the world do you expect to find them?"
"I... It doesn't matter. It was stupid anyway. Why do you care so much? S'not like it has anything to do with you." He looked pathetic now, like he had given up on the world. What was wrong with this guy anyway? And... why did she care?!? It was basic common curtesey! Ugh. Just her luck, the one cute guy she'd seen today, and he probably didn't even know his own name... speaking of which...
"Hey, I'm just trying to be nice. You're lucky I'm making the effort" she half joked. "By the way, you got a name?"
"Jacob. Jacob Black. Not that its going to matter for much longer..." he trailed off, then he mumbled horrified, "Four days. Four freaking days left."
Soo... what did you think? Once again, thanks for reading this story out of the thousands of others out there. I hope it was worth your while. Hey, how do you decide which stories to read anyway? I just click on the ones with interesting titles/summaries, but sometimes they're misleading. I hope to update in the next couple days.
