Can you guys tell me which is best? Option 1 or 2? They are both prologues.
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The three males left DTR studios, whispering quietly amongst themselves.
"This is going to be different."
"Very different," the redhead echoed.
"We don't even know her name!" the green eyed one complained.
"We should know that! Not her appearance."
"Our careers and reps depend on her and we still don't know her fucking name!" the light brown haired boy continued to complain.
Which in turn freaked out the freckled redhead. "What if she changes how she looks? And we are mean?"
"Shut your mouth, jackass," the blonde ordered. " She could be around, or worse, Razzi."
The males parted ways, and were seen by a redhead, dark curly haired, and straight dirtyblonde.
"What is my brother doing with those Slytherins?"
"What are our boyfriends doing with the bloodtraiter?"
"If any rumors are started, ouch."
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Everything in life was messed up. Jane wandered through the labyrinth of Malfoy Gardens. Kissing her newborn daughter on her forehead, she conjured up a baby carrier.
"Obliviate," the baby's few memories were wiped away. After tucking in the month old baby, she placed it on the Manor's doorstep. She knocked the knocker, and disapperated, with a "Good-bye Hermione Jean."
A little boy reached the door and shoved it open with all his might. It opened enough for him to slide through, and he did.
"Mummy!" he called out in surprise.
"Come here, darling," Queen Narcissa replied.
He toddled over and grabbed her hand. "Les go!" With that he ushered his mom out of the throne room. "Door! Door! Open! Open!" he urged.
Narcissa listened to Draco, and opened it. To her surprise, there was a coral colored bundle. She grabbed the bundle, and cocooned it in her arms. She shut the door, and walked in with the baby. She unwrapped the cold blanket from the warm baby, and accio'd Draco's warm things. Warming the baby up, she started a fire in the fireplace. Placed in a cocoon of pillows near the fire, the little girl gurgled.
A note fell out, and the Queen pulled it out. "Lucius! Look what Draco and I found on our doorstep," she told her husband, while lifting the fluffy white angel.
"Who is that?"
"I don't know. I haven't read the letter yet." The baby cooed and tried to lunge at the King's crown.
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Which is better? Please review and vote in your review.
Signing off,
Anna
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