BLACK AND YELLOW
All right guys this is my first fan fiction and I'll try to put in my best effort into it to make it as cool as possible though writing literature has never been one of my strong points but am going to try to make to make this work.
Ok so this story was originally going to start from Naruto's days in the academy but then like I said I have never been a fan of writing long stuffs like literatures and essays and so I decided to start at the arc where most of my ideas start to flow in…. "THE CHUNIN FINALS"..
And as for the pairing, I decided to go with my all time favorite "NaruHina" though I was considering a "NaruIno" but then good enough ideas on how to merge the both of them together wasn't just coming in. So please read through and am open to criticism (both good and bad, I hope they are all good ones though) so please drop your comments…
"You retard"- inhuman talking
'You retard'- inhuman thought
"Stupid fox"- human talking
'Stupid fox'- human thought
And the story starts in 3, 2, 1….
Chapter 1
It was a usually busy day in the village hidden in the leaves. Why won't it when the chunin exams were on and merchants from around the continent came to showcase and sell their goods. People could be seen in bars and stalls talking about the ongoing exams and who they thought had the possibility of winning.
"Am telling you Sasuke Uchiha is going to get through this exams like a walk in the park", one man said clearly drunk if the almost empty large cup of sake in front of him was any indication.
"After all he is the last Uchiha and is being trained under Hatake Kakashi",
"Say all you want but I am going to place all my money on the Hyuga prodigy", a young man clearly in his late twenties said as he picked up a stick of dango and took a bite out of it and chewed.
"He is said to be the best in his graduating set and defeated the Hyuga princess in a matter of minutes, not to talk of him facing the demon brat in the finals as his first match who clearly doesn't have any real skill and has been relying on his Uchiha team mate up to this point. He got through his preliminary match by dumb luck but what is he going to do against someone whose eyes can see all 360 degrees",
The man said laying down his facts as he dropped the now empty dango stick back into its bowl and smiled.
"And I also heard the Uchiha's foe is also a Jinchuriki and a killing machine at that, being the son of the kazekage also means he would have received some special training from his father right"?, The waitress who had come to drop the bill but got distracted listening to their discussion added in.
"Well we can only wait for that day", the man who ate the dango said as he smiled and looked out to the busy street.
SOMEWHERE ELSE
Several identical blonds could be seen engaged in various activities. While some were trying to walk on trees, others where meditating or going through katas. These guys were called clones and their original was not too far off as he was doing pushups.
"134,135,136,137…..", the sweaty blonde voice rang out as he continued his exercise.
He had no one to train him except an old perverted guy who only helped him undo what Orochimaru had done to him during their encounter in the forest of death and also managed to get him to sign a summoning contract with the toads. But now he was all alone, his white haired 'sensei' was nowhere to be found.
Refusing to resign to fate with determination to prove his opponent wrong, Naruto decided to train himself by learning chakra control exercises and improve his physical abilities since there was no one to teach him ninja techniques, he would have to at least dominate Neji in the department of endurance and physical strength. The young lad continued his training not taking notice of the shadow watching him from the trees.
TIMESKIP (3 HOURS LATER)
The sun had already set before Naruto fell to his butt panting from his day's activities. He picked up his water container and took a large gulp from it. He then got up, picked up his jacket and headed for his apartment. As he passed through the market place, he took notice of the jovial nature of the people who seemed like they weren't going home soon and were ready to spend the night drinking.
He scowled as he remembered this were the same people who chased him through this same market, with clubs and blades cursing his name and threatened to kill him because of his tenant.
Naruto smiled as he remembered the first time he met the fox. What transpired was not something any of them had planned for.
FLASHBACK
Naruto and his team rested in their client's house after their battle on the bridge. Naruto had tapped into his tenant chakra and was still out due to the fatigue that came with it. Sasuke, his team mate sat on the opposite bed beside him bandaged up as he closed his eyes and reminisced about what occurred on the battle field and smiled as he remembered that he had unlocked his sharingan. Kakashi and Sakura, his sensei and second teammate were out with the bridge builder but no one knew what was currently going on in their blonde team mate head.
Naruto opened his eyes to see himself floating in what looked like a sewer. As he got up on his feet, he groaned
"Don't tell me we were captured", he said as he rubbed his fore head.
"Don't be stupid human, if you were captured you would be in a cell with chakra restraints not in a sewer", a voice cried out.
"Hmm….who's that"? The blonde asked as he took a few steps back in preparation for a sneak attack that was when he noticed them. Large jail doors that looked locked.
"I guess you must really be an idiot cause I can clearly see jail doors meaning someone is locked in though I wonder what was going through my their minds when they built a jail that's about 100 times the height of a human.", the blonde lad said as he fell back on his butt.
"I say it once again, you are not in prison….rather you are the jailer", the voice said once again as it stepped into the light revealing its features.
It was a fox clearly as tall if not taller than the hokage tower. Several appendages that Naruto guessed were its tails swung behind it.
"O…so I guess you're the kyuubi", the blonde said as he got up again.
"You guess? Are you that stupid? What other evidence do you need to prove that I am the great kyuubi", the beast said as it growled.
"Yeah yeah…keep talking but it doesn't change the fact that is out here and you are in there", the blonde said with a smirk".
"Damn you…you retard", the beast roared as it tried to reach for its container through the space provided by the bars, but alas he couldn't reach far.
Naruto seeing he was safe from its reach took another good look at the creature.
"Why"? He asked.
"Why? why what"
"Why did you attack Konoha?"
"Because I felt like",
"Really….?",
"…", The fox said nothing else.
"You know for an ancient beast, you're not a very good liar"…the blonde said as he got up. "I have practically been lied to all my life so u can say I kind of developed a lie detector as a sixth sense. So tell me the truth, why did you attack ", the blonde said as he stepped closer to the jail bars.
The fox chuckled as he looked at the human
"You got guts kid….calling me a liar and still having the balls to come closer", the demon said as it's closed its eyes and smiled.
"…" Naruto said nothing as he continued his slow movement towards the cage.
The fox seeing as his host said nothing exhaled and opened his eyes.
"You ever heard of a man called Uchiha Madara?", the fox started
(You guys know what happened so am not going to bore you with a story you have watched and probably read a lot of times so I'll skip it)
FLASHBACK END
He had finally understood the fox reasons and over the past few months they had become friends though not really close as they still had their differences but the fox still helped him when he need help with his training by pointing out a few things and when he also needed some advice. Where else to get advice than from the wrinkled mind of an ancient beast who had probably seen a lot of things.
"When you are done with your stupid reminiscing you would want to know you are been surrounded with killer intent pouring out from the people watching you."
Our hero snapped back to the present as he looked back at the bar and saw the men who were drinking glaring at him murderously.
Naruto frowned and continued on his previous journey as he could still feel their eyes on him.
"You know no one's around, you can make quick work of them using that technique", his tenant advised.
"No need, after all it would soon be time", the lad replied as he dug out his keys and opened his door. He closed it and without switching on the lights he dropped his jacket and turned immediately and walked to his small kitchen and flipped the bulb switch to on. As he poured water into a kettle in order to brew tea he closed his eyes and spoke to no one in particular.
"When do I start learning real ninjutsu", he said as he set out two cups and poured the hot water into them.
"We start tomorrow, get ready a small bag we are going on a training trip", a voice answered as a figure stood up within the darkness of the living room and approached the kitchen cabinet with two red orbs glowing in the dark.
End of chapter one
All right since this is my first chapter I decided to make it short and I just wanted to know what you guys think. Just as a warning am going to change a lot of things that happened in the actual story because I know some people are going to complain once they see a large deviation from the actual plot but this is a fan fiction, we are meant to write our own ideas using the actual story as a frame work so thanks for understanding. And also please forgive my English, am not too good in it, all I did was write as I normally use my words though I tried my best to correct them.