Aurea: this is my first poem so let me know what you think, whether it is a good or bad opinion.
Waiting for our forever
When the sun rises again,
it will be goodbye until tomorrow.
The nights we spent watching the stars,
will remain with me forever.
The warmth of your love,
that melted even my cold heart,
will return again.
-x-
When the sun sets again,
I am still wishing for tomorrow,
While I sit alone watching the stars,
Waiting for our forever
I am cold without your love
I will always remember those nights in my heart.
Though you won't return again.