Divergent Alternate ending

Disclaimer: Hey guys my name is not Veronica Roth I'm only thirteen so yea thx I only own my plot line not the Divergent books or her characters if I did I probably wouldn't be here?

Chapter one

I wake up from the simulation with a startled gasp.

Tori grips my hand so tightly I'm surprised she didn't cut off my circulation.

"Tris I just want you to know one I would never be angry at you, And two I am so sorry you had to see that it was your mothers idea she thought that by showing nine people the future that you all could stop the war. So so far you, Four, Zeke, Uriah, and Shauna have seen that. The rest as in Lynn, Mar, Chris, and Will need to see it."

"Does Shauna hate me?" I ask quietly. I didn't hear the back door open until she speaks up,

"Oh Tris honey I could never hate my little sister."

"What?" I ask.

"Tris, Lynn and I are your biological sisters. You were taken away two months after you and Lynn were born." Shauna says tears glistening in her eyes. "For months I'd thought you'd died but then mom explained it to me. A man named David stole you and gave you to Natalie and Andrew Prior. We know you are divergent. The stuff simulation me didn't tell you is that me and Lynn are also divergent and I think that sim me was only angry because she didn't want her sister to get hurt."

"This is very shocking information." I say. Shauna nods understandably.

"It is a lot to take in I definitely understand that. But I will have you know I will stand by your side as your sister and your friend. And we will win this war. Only if you would let me."

"Of course I would love to be the sister to you and Lynn. Do you think that I could change my last name? Oh and what's my birthday?" Shauna's smile lights up the room.

"Of course you can change your last name. You are now officially Beatrice Halloway. Your birthday is the 26 of April same as Lynn and Mar's."

"Thank you so much for telling me this, Sis." Thats all it took Shauna breaks down. I hear the door open and close again Zeke and Tobias enter the room followed closely by Uriah.

"Shhhh Shauna its okay. What's wrong honey." Zeke coos. Shauna's sobs pause.

"I'm just so happy to finally have my other sister back." I smile. Tobias looks up at me and the smile he wears practically breaks his face. He opens his arms and I run into them.

"I'm sorry I'm so so sorry." I say sobbing into his chest.

"Shush Tris honey its okay." He says practically repeating Zeke's words from earlier. " I'm not mad at you." Just then Tori whom I forgot was there said the classic line.

" Your results were inconclusive." We all bust up. "Now get out of here before the supervisor comes." She says sternly. We all wave bye.

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When we reach my house we all go around the back. The plan is to tell my mom where we are going and she will tell my dad who is in on the plan. Shauna bought me and Christina some Dauntless clothes whereas Zeke bought some for Will. Uriah told Tori to tell Will and Christina where to go to meet up with us.

"Hi 'mom'" I say as I walked in the door emphasizing mom.

"So I guess you were informed that I am not your biological mother?" She asks.

"Yes. Sixteen years you have had to tell me and you didn't honestly I'm disappointed."

"I am so sorry Beatrice David threatened to reveal my secret to Erudite and I was afraid I would die and then you wouldn't have a mother and more than likely no father." She says.

"That was selfish." I reply.

"I know and I'm sorry."

"Ok I'll get over it but my last name is now Halloway and me and my friends are going to Dauntless to plan." I say and she nods

"Tell Hana Nat says hi. She is my sister. One piece of the sim that was inaccurate was that max was in on the plan. He is divergent and is not helping Jeanine."

"Ok thanks." I reply and with that I am out the door.

"Guys Max is on our side." I say. They nod.

"He was the one who got us the serums for the aptitude test."

"I was wondering how you got those."

"Guys we should probably start moving. People are peeping and by people I mean Marcus Eaton." I say. "He hasn't noticed you guys but he is coming over." Tobias rushes around to the back of the house and we all follow him.

"Hurry." I whisper shout to Uriah who is lagging behind. Shauna reaches out and grabs my hand. And we run and don't look back.

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We reach the tracks with twenty minutes to spare.

"Here Tris," Shauna says while handing me a stack of clothes. " There's an abandoned building over there. Common lets go get you changed. Make up hair and all."

"Okay." We walk to the building and Shauna turns around and I quickly put on the black ripped skinny jeans, a black crop top, and a pair of combat boots with spikes. When I'm finished she applies concealer under my eyes to cover dark circles from sleepless nights worry about the aptitude test. She then puts a little bronzer on my face and some blush. She then gives me a smokey eye look. She finishes the eyes with what she calls her signature wing. She fishes off the look with a dark lip and adds rose gold highlight to my cheek bones, cupids bow, my brow bone, and the tip of my nose.

She says that my eyebrows are perfect so she doesn't need to do anything. Apparently we need to get tattoo's and piercings. She also wants us to go to the spa.

We return to the group and Tobias' jaw is unhinged from his face. Shauna snickers next to me.

"Close your mouth you'll catch flies," I say. Shauna can't hold back her laugh now. She is practically rolling on the floor. " Don't die on me sis." I say laughing. A few minutes later we here Zeke and Uriah.

"Shut up, someone's coming." Zeke whispers. That stops our laughter. We hear voices that are distinctly female and one of them reminds me of my voice deep but feminine. Lynn and Marlene. We see them emerge from an alley.

"Hey guys." Shauna calls. "C'mere," they head towards us. Lynns eyes are locked on mine. I never noticed how pretty she really was with her long blonde hair and golden eyes. Whereas Shauna has dark hair with blue eyes. My eyes. Then it happens Lynn is running right at me. I open my arms expecting to catch her. But she jumps at me wrapping me in her arms. Giving me a hug. Gasps are heard Lynn doesn't just give you a hug, she has to really like you or you have to be family.

"Oh my god." She whispers, "your real."

A/N Hey Guys so my other story kinda went flop. I have just been really stressed out and school got crazy so I couldn't update. The sad lart is I ligit have thirty chapters but they are on notebook paper and not on my computer, so I haven't found time to transfer it over? Sorry. Ok my next update for this should be soon. It will mostly be Tris's pov but you never know.

~A?