Hello, this is my first fan fiction and I'm so excited! I would appreciate a lot of reviews to improve my writing. I will take the negative and positive sides of all reviews given. Although I don't want and would like to avoid as much as possible foul language in any of your reviews to me, please. I would also like to say that I do not own any of the characters in my fan fiction. I wish I did : ). In conclusion please enjoy Ch.1.


Midnight demons

Kagome slips on her shoes and walks out the door of her house. She waves good bye to her family then quickly runs down the temple stairs. Later that evening she had been invited to go to the new horror show that her friends begged her to go to all week. Most of the time she would say no being to scared " but " she thought to herself what could be worse than facing Naraku or fighting demons twenty times the size of you this movie could never be that bad". By now Kagome had arrived at the theater where Ayumi, Eri and Yuka were waiting in line.

"Sorry if I kept you guys waiting " Kagome says as she catches her breath and takes her place in line with her friends.

"No it's okay Kagome we didn't get here but two minutes ago ". Ayumi said Cheerfully.

"Yeah, we ran into that new boy whats his face, ummmm ohhh yeah Tain he's cute ". Eri said before she started to giggle.

"What's so funny "? Kagome asks.

"He told us that he REALY likes you A LOT! but we told him that you already have a boyfriend ". Yuka said before she bought her ticket.

"Oh well" Kagome thought to herself, Hope he didn't take it to hard" Kagome bought her ticket and entered the theater. An hour later Kagome and her friends came out talking nonstop about the movie. But to Kagome the movie was much longer and was way scarier than she thought it would be it would be.

"Oh my goodness when the man with the axe popped out of her trunk I nearly jumped out of my seat". Ayumi said

Kagome listened to her friends chatting until they had to go there separate ways. Before she could go home she had to pick up Sota's truck he forgot in the park and he was to afraid to get it in the dark. "Man the park is creepy in the dark, no just get the truck and go. She looked up to the eerie moon shining though the clouds until suddenly CCCRAACK! Kagome looks violently around her and calls out

" Who's there? "


Sooo tell me what you think PLEASE and I will get to the next chapter asap.

Mareina